IHeartHookah.com - Please Review

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    Nima, May 11, 2009 IP
  2. amunet

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    The hookah image on the left is too much to the left since it is cut off. The navigation looks good, and I like the header font. Just keep up with the content :)
     
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  3. Plato

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    I like it!

    It's very clean, and simple. I like what you've done with the WordPress!

    For design, I would show the recent hookah reviews (posts in that category) on the sidebar. This will also help fill up empty space on the index. Plus it will make your site seem bigger, with more information showing.

    With SEO you should add more to your title. Try something like "Hookah Reviews by I Heart Hookah"

    G'luck!
     
    Plato, May 11, 2009 IP
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    It's not something I can change. It has to do with the theme that I modified, and the original writer has it set so that the root background has a white outline of about 20px, and there's not much I can do unless I completely rewrite it. But thanks! I'll be sure to keep up the quality of the posts. :)


    Thanks! Simple was definitely what I was going for. We'll work on the extra info in the sidebar, that's a good idea. :)
     
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  5. Plato

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    I like the style the theme has, but it's difficult to read the text buttons for the pages. I try using white instead of the black.

    Also think about adding more pictures of hookahs, and a tagline at the top to inform visitors what your site is easier.
     
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    website design is clean .. i like the content on your site
     
    rizmedia, May 11, 2009 IP
  7. vr4girl

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    Thank you!
     
    vr4girl, May 12, 2009 IP
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    The subject matter is good but the design of the site is quite garish. You might want to find more pleasing colors and appropriate design for the site.
     
    SiteBetter, May 12, 2009 IP
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    Thank you. The one bright color on it, has a lot to do with me. It's not going to be changed for a while.
     
    vr4girl, May 12, 2009 IP
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    nice video I could add:)
     
    Toptrafficorg, May 12, 2009 IP