I would like some constructive criticism of my website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by jasonb25, Jul 2, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hi ,

    Can some of you give me a review of my website. I would like some constructive criticism and what you think about the copywriting (if you can call it that:)). I have done most of it from scratch and i am interested in what you have to say.

    http://www.onlinemoneymakin.com - this is my website

    Thanks in advance.

    Jason

    p.s About the Welcome part of the home page is that alright or have i gone over the top? It is just a welcome and then what my site has to offer.
     
    jasonb25, Jul 2, 2008 IP
  2. wordsofmousewriting

    wordsofmousewriting Peon

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    I could not get the site to load. The first time I tried, the status bar said it was loading a lot of images. Nothing ever loaded, though. The second time I tried, nothing happened at all. All other sites work and my connection is solid. Are you experiencing technical difficulties?
     
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  3. apple

    apple Active Member

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    The website works fine. Nice website. I didnt understand what copyrights you meant.
    IMHO, if you could add less text on the front page, instead of making it too lengthy, it might be nice. (it was just my personal thinking). Apart from that, very nice design.


    P.S. If you like, give your comments about my website. thanks.
    http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=914844
     
    apple, Jul 3, 2008 IP
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    I would say, a near perfect site, but it luks bit fully filled up.....but, yes, a gud marketting site
     
    Juvi, Jul 3, 2008 IP