I want to give you rep if you give me an honest review about my opt-in website.

Hi Dpers,

I been having 100 plus uniques everyday but no one has subscribed to my newsletter and my ebook.

Can you guys give me your reviews about my opt in form? Why wouldn't you guys want to subscribe to it?

The website is www.truthofabs.com

It's about abdominal training by the way.

Thanks.will give rep for a detailed and honest review.

Janice.

 

Site looks good. I would give the body background color.

 

You should have an attention getting header to show the visitors what the page is about. "Welcome" does nothing to keep me at the site.

I had to scroll all the way down to the bottom and look at the free e-book to see what the page is about.

Say something like "Want 6-pack Abs in 6 Weeks? Keep reading..."

 

Do not offer rep for this you can get banned just an advice. The site is a normal ebook site not much to say but good luck!

 

I personally think the pitch page is a little long. I know people want to get as much information up there as possible, but maybe even split it up between 2 or 3 pages so it's not all "in their face" at once. just my 2 cents.

 

I would leave the pitch page...they are supposed to be loaded with information to make you look like an expert. Can you change your hanging opt in email form to pop up in the middle of the page instead of the side? That would help if it was in plain view instead of the reader's peripherals

 

It looks good but you need to put your sites watermarks on the images and get rid of the popup. Nobody likes popups/popunders. You should add some color and utilize some header tags while your at it.