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    Med diet 'helps prevent diabetes'

    The Mediterranean diet is rich in fruit and vegetables


    Sticking to a diet which includes fruit, vegetables, fibre and healthier fats could protect against type two diabetes, a study suggests.

    More than 14,000 Spanish volunteers were quizzed about eating habits, then checked over four years to see who developed the condition.

    The results pointed to an 83% lower risk for those who followed the diet, the British Medical Journal reported.

    But UK experts said the study was not conclusive.

    People living in Crete, southern Italy and Greece provided the inspiration for the so-called Mediterranean diet.

    Their traditional lifestyle involved not only regular exercise, but also plenty of fish, fruit and vegetables, usually cooked in olive oil, and washed down with the occasional glass of red wine.

    Studies have suggested that modern diets based on this ideal could improve heart health.
    The idea that it could also reduce the risk of diabetes is a logical step - olive oil is already known to improve blood sugar control and lower blood pressure.

    The 14,000 men and women, of varying ages, were all scored on their own recollection of which elements of the Mediterranean diet they followed in day-to-day life, and split into three groups, depending on the level of their adherence to the diet.

    As well as gaining a point for eating key ingredients fish, fruit and olive oil, they got one for cutting back on animal fats and keeping to a moderate alcohol intake.

    The highest group had managed seven or more points, while the bottom group had less than three points.

    The researchers then waited to see who developed diabetes over the next four years, and found that the average risk for those in the highest group was 83% lower than for those in the lowest group.

    Those in the middle had a 59% fall in the risk of diabetes.
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    phinik, May 30, 2008 IP
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    We have already discussed on rewriters turning articles into crap, but due to you are new to the forum I would advise you digg some threads back inside this section to find it out.
     
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    scylla Notable Member

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    lol, someone actually got suckered into buying that piece of junkware.

     
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    "Adhering to a diet which switches on fruit, vegetables, the fibre and more healthy fats could protect two diabetes against type, research offers. "

    Read your first sentence and tell me it doesn't make you laugh.

    It's crap.

    Tell the original writer to learn when to use "which" and when to use "that."
     
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    "Just as receiving point that there is key fish of components, fruit and an olive oil, they have reached one to reduce fats of animals and to store to moderate spirit introduction."

    I don't know if that sentence could make any less sense.
     
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    It's actually pretty funny. I think this is the software they use when writing product manuals. Apparently it adds typos for you! Very handy.
     
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    To keep it simple, original and rewritten article are far from being good.
     
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  8. DeniseJ

    DeniseJ Live, Laugh, Love

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    WTF.

    There was a post recently with the same title. ARTICLE REWRITERS ARE CRAP. YES. I SAID IT. I'M CAPITALIZING IT IN THE HOPES THAT PERHAPS IT WILL FINALLY REGISTER IN A BRAIN SOMEWHERE.

    The first article is bad enough - the second is laughable. Please, get out of the content business if you can't afford to have someone write something that makes sense.
     
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    I had seen similar results from others. There is nothing better than writing each and every letter manually. Let your gray cells do some work man.
     
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    We need a sticky that says "Article spinners are crap. Don't ask us to compare your original and spun articles."
     
    latoya, Jun 2, 2008 IP