Hello Everyone, I have written an article. You can see it in the link below. http://www.amazines.com/article_detail.cfm/2703996?articleid=2703996 Tell me your opinion about it. How informative is it? Thank You
I assume that English is not your first language, which is fair enough, but trust me when I tell you this is not quality content for the Western world. I lost the will to live after reading a couple of sentences. Sorry dude, it is not good material.
Well , for example here doesn't make sense: those who want success in minutes can never their target because article marketing is an internet magic but not any supernatural power that would throw you in the sea of success. But for sure you can improve your language Just don't give up
The content is valuable. The presentation (writing) isn't very compelling. This may be an opportunity to promote having someone write the article for the person trying to market the product. We need to see that the article itself needs to be both compelling and interesting for someone to be interested in the project.
sorry to say, but this is not really an article in the 'clearly written info zone' - and if you are really writer, use a better example of your work... good luck and keep polishing it!
It's poorly written, the grammar is atrocious, too many repeated words in the same sentences. Punctuation not good - try using commas, semi-colons etc, to break up the sentence. If you are reading a sentence out loud, there should be a puntuation mark every time you take in a breath. Always proof read what you have written, or preferably get another person to, before you submit it. I would strongly recommend the following book - for anyone who intends to write articles in the English language - it's called "The Queen's English And How To Use It." (It's available on Amazon - that's where I bought my copy.) I have a good command of the English Language, but I still find it invaluable for things which, although I learned them at school forty nine years ago, I have tended to forget. It's next to me now, in my work as a copywriter/proof reader.
You need to improve your grammar and your sentence structure. You also need to simplify your sentences and I would definitely recommend holding off on publishing any articles on the net before improving your skills. Don't give up though! Keep practicing and you'll get better over time.
Your article would benefit from a revision that targets clarity, grammar, and punctuation. Don't give up. There are plenty of digital resources that can help you sharpen your command of the language. Reading articles written by authors you respect can also help you train your eye.
Try to limit your words into 200-250. Visitors might get bored and leave your site. Try using a bullet type article to emphasize important details.
Keep improving the content, you surely can improve the content by working harder and practicing more.
Seriously now - why the hell are you replying to a thread that is 108 days old! Also you haven't said anything of any value - oh look if you work hard at something you'll get better at it. Wow what a life lesson - thanks for those pearls of wisdom