I need your opinion: Possible Portfolio Design

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by Destinyx3, Jul 23, 2009.

  1. #1
    I am just looking for some opinions on this design. It is a new design I may apply on my portfolio. I think it is sleek and fits my style, but I would like some criticism. I plan on making it a one-page portfolio. What do you guys think?

    http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/73/82204616.png
     
    Destinyx3, Jul 23, 2009 IP
  2. matafixer

    matafixer Active Member

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    I guess it's ok, works fine for a starter portfolio. You should make that upper right graphic more complicated... But anyway, it looks cool.
     
    matafixer, Jul 23, 2009 IP
  3. Destinyx3

    Destinyx3 Peon

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    #3
    It is not intended as a starter portfolio. I have been freelancing for almost a year.

    Hm, maybe I should scrap this...
     
    Destinyx3, Jul 24, 2009 IP
  4. sheryonline

    sheryonline Well-Known Member

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    #4
    no destiny its cool ... its a gud one ..
    i like it
    cheers
    Shery !
     
    sheryonline, Jul 24, 2009 IP
  5. Destinyx3

    Destinyx3 Peon

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    #5
    Thanks shery :)

    That's one supporter.
     
    Destinyx3, Jul 24, 2009 IP
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    zartworkdesigns Peon

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    #6
    yea i like it, its clean and professional, good as a one pager!
     
    zartworkdesigns, Jul 24, 2009 IP
  7. jashsayani

    jashsayani Active Member

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    #7
    So far so good.

    But if you have more work, then I cannot recommend this as its only good for a few works. For a larger portfolio, you need a complete page with your work.

    But nice design. I like it.
     
    jashsayani, Jul 24, 2009 IP
  8. Destinyx3

    Destinyx3 Peon

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    #8
    I plan on putting more work, but the two there are just examples.

    I'm glad you guys like it though, I might use it after all :)
     
    Destinyx3, Jul 24, 2009 IP
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    creative-le Peon

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    #9
    Not bad. The red might be too bold for me, but the layout is good.
     
    creative-le, Jul 24, 2009 IP
  10. Destinyx3

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    Thanks Creative-le. I might tone it down a bit, but I'm not sure where. Any suggestions?

    Also, I have had a few people say that I need to improve my typography. Anybody have suggestions?
     
    Destinyx3, Jul 24, 2009 IP
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    #11
    Its really nice destiny. I like it.
     
    PaceSolutions, Jul 25, 2009 IP
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    #12
    The design is really good. Although i would increase the line-height of the text
     
    crypton, Jul 25, 2009 IP
  13. matafixer

    matafixer Active Member

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    #13
    well, I think you still count as a starter, one year in graphic design isn't that much. But for one year in graphic design- really good.
     
    matafixer, Jul 25, 2009 IP
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    #14
    I like it, its quite good. I think you should increase the line and letter spacing in the text, it looks too cramped up.
     
    tanay46, Jul 26, 2009 IP
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    #15
    its looking good. please add some more example and some details so client can read and understand your quality with work experience.
     
    CheapSEO, Jul 26, 2009 IP
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    #16
    Nice design! You really need to clean up the letter spacing though..after that..a 9/10!
     
    mstrock, Jul 27, 2009 IP
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    #17
    Let me clarify that. I like the letter spacing on the logo. It looks like you kept it at the same spacing for the content text though. Change that and justify the content text to follow the lines of your boxes and you will have a winning design!
     
    mstrock, Jul 27, 2009 IP