http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1QBBXrAy-sc this is my first video , so i hope if you can help me by telling me your mind about it , and tell me my mistakes
Well first of all the presentation was detailed and informative which is key, good job! The recommendations I have is since you're new to the youtube business so to speak shorten your videos a little if possible most viewer have a very short attention spand. Also the website if any that you want the viewers to go to should be the first thing your description box followed by the actually description of what's in the video, but overall great first video!
The video seems a little bit long to me. Actually most of the viewers want a little bit shorter one and me too! But the video is good enough!