I need your feedback please

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by RichNewbie, Aug 15, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hi all just wanted to ask for your help :) i have what you call a ebook created which i totally believe in...anyway yes you need a web site which i got, need a sales page etc... which i have....

    Anyway i need you honest feedback on the site look sales page etc...

    Even though i have a perfect ebook for anyone ...i have paid for a company to put this together for me....what do you think guys/women to improve and to draw customers to at least sign-up..Thanks

    www.therichnewbie.com

    RichNewbie
     
    RichNewbie, Aug 15, 2008 IP
  2. Bre

    Bre Peon

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    #2
    The font on the left side of the site is too hard to read. At first, I thought the words were Chinese characters (I'm American and only read English), so I was confused for a second.

    Also, I don't recall you mentioning the price of the book on the page. That's always good. :) In fact, I clicked on the "buy it now" button and it went straight to Paypal without telling me a price. I never buy before I know how much, but that's just me.
     
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  3. RichNewbie

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    Hey thanks for the feedback,
    I have took your advice on the info on the left hand side, I thought it needed to be more bold.

    And as for the price lol i do agree but what worse :mad:is a missed it myself lol but thanks anyway. :)

    Tony
     
    RichNewbie, Aug 19, 2008 IP
  4. Under the Radar

    Under the Radar Active Member

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    The sales letter is too short. For a moment, I thought it was a squeeze page. I will remove the navigation on the left and the only things visitors can do is to either order or opt-in. For the opt-in box, I will place it somewhere in the middle of the sales letter. Or better still, create a slide in box for this purpose.
     
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  5. Squidoodle

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    dude invest in some quality graphics, only costs about $100 for a cool banner/logo

    worth it don't you think?
     
    Squidoodle, Aug 20, 2008 IP
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    Well, i would advise you to first get a good web designer to design that site for you, who ever did it for you the first time, get your money back because like 5 years ago thta would have been ok but, now it just doesn't suffice.
    I hope you don't take any offence.
     
    Tobidotman, Aug 20, 2008 IP
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    you might want to have it in your signature as well

    and don't worry to much about graphics more about marketing thats really the hard part if no one sees it whats the point of having a pretty one
     
    ErikJ, Aug 20, 2008 IP
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    First of all I wish you good luck.

    Market it any way you can, make changes as you go on. I think I would try to add something else to either side of the main advert. Rss feeds or testimonials are always a good thing down the sides.
     
    goldenboy14, Aug 20, 2008 IP