i need your critique on this logo

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by allawy, Jul 10, 2009.

  1. #1
    The logo icon consists of three doors with a big center one chosen by a little mouse.
    with the mouse and the doors , i made the logo stand for the media and the name "bigdoor"
     

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  2. cheesy

    cheesy Peon

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    #2
    Im not too keen on the mouse, but everything else seems to be good, very nice logo overall :D
     
    cheesy, Jul 10, 2009 IP
  3. genji

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    #3
    yeah i think you should take out the mouse. Also, the logo is too detailed I think because when this logo is viewed from afar or printed on a paper, it won't be as visible
     
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  4. i.run.shit

    i.run.shit Peon

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    #4
    I also agree about the mouse. It just doesn't fit in with the elegance of the design at all. When the image is printed out, genji is correct, those little lines aren't quite as clear. On screen it looks elegant, on paper it looks like crapola.
     
    i.run.shit, Jul 10, 2009 IP
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    graphi87 Well-Known Member

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    #5
    i also hav a similar opinion, the mouse will not be very much visible.
    but u can make the mouse big, this will make it prominent. thus ur theme will also continue...
     
    graphi87, Jul 10, 2009 IP
  6. allawy

    allawy Member

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    I liked your point of view and changed the font to the ne on this link
    http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7982/2232752original.jpg
     
    allawy, Jul 11, 2009 IP
  7. Groffy77

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    #7
    I liked the first logo's font more. I like the changes (except the font) in the second one. What you should do, though, is make the lines of the door thicker because right now they're very thin and they look weak. It also might be a good idea to tweak each of the door pane's so that they are all in the same perspective instead of being a carbon copy of each other.
     
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    I like it... could use more color but not if thats just the main colors u were goin for.
     
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    BeeMWyou Well-Known Member

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    #9
    I like the first one, however, you might want to lose the mouse.
     
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    #10
    i will got for the first one better try black background and with white writtings and drawing on it ! will look more neat
     
    smcybercool, Jul 11, 2009 IP
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    one9host Well-Known Member

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    #11
    I like it but should the mouse be there?
     
    one9host, Jul 11, 2009 IP
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    #12
    yeah i hav the same opinion about the mouse because at the very first luk everything luks gud xcept that mouse ........Overall logo is nice
    thanx
    Shery !
     
    sheryonline, Jul 12, 2009 IP
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    duckz Active Member

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    #13
    Need more coloring scheme IMHO
     
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    #14
    Have you thought about this log being in B&W?
     
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  15. Lufern

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    #15
    Good. You did it best. Simple yet its very elegant..
    But you need a little enhancement for that
    to make it more elegant and professional.
     
    Lufern, Jul 13, 2009 IP
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    #16
    my opinion:
    remove the mouse arrow,
    and the small door from the left side is placed closer then the one in the right side.. so the right side shoud be smaller than the left side.
     
    Bogdanel, Jul 13, 2009 IP
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    #17
    overall looks good to me, just that you need remove the mouse :)
     
    laguna1811, Jul 14, 2009 IP
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    #18
    It looks great, it would be awesome if you remove the cursor.
     
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    #19
    nice logo. well done.
     
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    #20
    Could do with standing out a little more but nice logo :)
     
    Photoshop_Designer, Jul 14, 2009 IP