I need you guys to tell me how to improve my new home page before it goes online!

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    JackR, Mar 25, 2006 IP
  2. nonflasher

    nonflasher Peon

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    nice site and nice girls, too.

    I would change:

    1. the 'london escort agency' text over the navigation. use another font. it looks not really good. the same for the phonenumber and calltime: other font.

    2. change the hover style from the navigation. I looks a little bit weird that it goes down and up. I would go for only a color change as you did.

    3. if I look at the page, I'm awaiting that the hot girl on the right side would change to other ones. only my opinion.

    4. I would highly recommend to optimize your coding!
    example: no metatags, no h1 h2 etc. tags, styled with bordes - use CSS!

    5. maybe I would put the 'about us' content that appears on the main (start) -page into a own section and put some hardfacts on the page.

    but overall the site looks very good and is matching the topic of the site very very good.

    my last question: what did you get for the site? money or some playtime with a girl... :p
     
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  3. zappy

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    Hi,
    Seriously great design and nice layout.

    Yes and the mouse over color of green should be changed i think. May be to grey or something?

    Really cool design ..
     
    zappy, Mar 25, 2006 IP
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    Why does the text go over the edge/border? Is it deliberate?

    The flash logo/header looks really great. The colours good, and images.

    Are there any copyright issues on using the name 'spice girls' out of interest?
     
    AmyNelson, Mar 26, 2006 IP
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    i would change it to a 2 pane design... the center pane as it is now is to narrow...

    take the right pane and move it to the bottom of the left pane...

    overall, a very nice site - congrats!
     
    daboss, Mar 26, 2006 IP
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    Dont mind but i think you should try to flashoptimize the header swf so that the page loads a bit faster
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    and this style looks a bit oldschool, try to use more colors on this page, it can be more appealing than what its now.
     
    SEO Guru, Mar 26, 2006 IP
  7. AmyNelson

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    Personally I like the scroll style, it adds some class. I think because of the subject that the site is dealing with, he has to be careful to give a classy apperance, otherwise it could look tacky and cheap.
     
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  8. JackR

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    Wow, thank you all for your comments. One thing I think is missing is a 'London' identity ... do you folks think that a London panorama should be added to the Flash animation in some way. I had been thinking that the girls should be in the foreground, with a night time view of London behind. The Flash definitely needs something more .. though I’m not sure what!

    The home page definitely needs to be three-pane as I'm having keyword rich articles written for the right-hand navigation menu.

    From an SEO point of view, the site is a mess. I think it’s more important to finalise the design before doing the SEO work.


    That would be telling ;)
     
    JackR, Mar 26, 2006 IP
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    I love it, I'm not complaining lol
     
    rick sample, Mar 26, 2006 IP
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    FireStorM Well-Known Member

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    well designed site
     
    FireStorM, Mar 26, 2006 IP
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    I think the site looks nice and clean, sweet Job~
     
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    "One thing I think is missing is a 'London' identity ..."

    If the site is aimed at international tourists to London too, what about a graphic of the union jack, a cool glossy looking one.
     
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  13. JackR

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    I was thinking more along the lines of a panorama of the London skyline after dark..! These days, sadly, the Union Jack carries negative connotations ...
     
    JackR, Mar 26, 2006 IP
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    Wow. Very nice looking site. Not sure that I'd change anything! Except maybe the bottom navigation links - the current blue blends in a little too much with the background, probably would be barely visible (if at all) on my laptop.
     
    riotz, Mar 26, 2006 IP
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    chachacallis Well-Known Member

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    good looking site but for some reason some of the graphics didnt load like the one over the girls head at the said, overall your page takes a while to load even though i am using 2mb broadband.
     
    chachacallis, Mar 26, 2006 IP
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    Nice site. Simple to navigate and it flows. The pics look good and have great resolutions.
     
    hmdeassis, Mar 29, 2006 IP
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    Nice site design and definitely appealing :D
     
    87654321, Mar 30, 2006 IP