I need you advice or opinion please!

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by 2010Business, Jan 12, 2010.

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    I did a little project about weight loss what do you think about it? Please he honest! Read here...
     
    2010Business, Jan 12, 2010 IP
  2. pteal

    pteal Peon

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    I intend no disrespect, but I'm not sure what the purpose of your site really is. The first thing that I though of when I viewed your site was that it looked like a parked domain landing page with links to bits and pieces of random information, and links to other websites, all to increase search engine ranking. With content like "Bridge to Success I don't even know why I'm writing this article....," it leaves me even more suspicious, since the article doesn't say anything meaningful. However, after viewing several pages of your site, including the home page, it seems like you really do have an honest website and want to help others.

    The layout of your site is nice, and it's easy to navigate, but you have a ton of content to wade through, some of which is pretty useless IMO. You may attract more viewers if you cut back on some of that content and focus on what's really important to you. Maybe you could organize the links in your vertical menu into categories, such as personal goals, and businesses that you support. Right now it's difficult to discern what each menu item is for.

    Also, your site header image with the dove and the church takes up prime real estate on your page, and I have to scroll down to see the content. Could you shorten the header, and move the content up higher, so it's easier to see?

    I hope this helps, and I hope that I didn't offend you. I'm just giving you my honest opinion.

    -Peter
     
    pteal, Jan 14, 2010 IP
  3. joshuthomas

    joshuthomas Well-Known Member

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    hey howdy,..

    Site is not bad, But has the below cons ( no offence)

    - looks like a website designed 4-5 years ago
    - looks like done on word
    - image uses are not apt.
    - No styling , like fonts are diff sizes and not formatted.

    Writing is good.

    Cheers
    Josh
     
    joshuthomas, Jan 14, 2010 IP
  4. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    The contents are interesting but the theme is very old and simple.Need a attractive one to impress visitors more..
     
    netdriver788, Jan 17, 2010 IP
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    Definitely agree that the site could use some updating also, remember to keep the new FTC rulings in mind especially with reference to weight loss.

    Good luck!
     
    brmbiz, Jan 17, 2010 IP
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    i think you just need change the site layout
     
    princeachilles, Jan 18, 2010 IP
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    What's funny is you have an ad saying "lose weight without dieting", and then you follow on to say "You must cut significantly from your diet foods like sugar, bread, meets, coffee, cakes and all foods that contain sugar and fats!"

    I just don't see how people could take you seriously with something like that. The English isn't 100% either with a fair few grammatical errors. As mentioned above, the overall website design looks and feels old. By my opinion, it needs a complete revamp if you want to make it look good.
     
    dawack, Jan 18, 2010 IP