I need to make my sales page much better

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by DanJacobs, Aug 12, 2011.

  1. #1
    Hello,

    I have a few products on CB, most have been there for around 16 months but i havn't had a single sale.

    I'm on the brink of considering selling the website as someone else can make it work a heck of a lot better and i've been offered fairly good money for it.

    My Clickbank sales page is: http://www.dansdrumlessons.co.uk/drum-lessons-subscribe

    Seems all the effort is worthless, i may as well get a job that pays a wage instead.

    How would you optimise the sales page to make it more appealing - the products are very good and can definately help millions of drummers who hit brick walls in practice - like nearly all do after a while.

    Thanks in advance
    Dan
     
    DanJacobs, Aug 12, 2011 IP
  2. GrandRoyal

    GrandRoyal Member

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    You have a low converting sales page have a professional looking page that people like to see.
    You are trying to sell not convincing people that this course is for them. So help them and recommend them to try your product.
     
    GrandRoyal, Aug 14, 2011 IP
  3. J8000

    J8000 Peon

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    I have the same, I cannot write sales pages :p
     
    J8000, Aug 15, 2011 IP
  4. rovad

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    So you are using some CMS with an ordinary template, you have Adsense on your "sales" page, the "sales copy" is absolutely horrible and even your call to action "button" is not so straightforward either - you need to take a few lessons on the basics of sales copywriting, my friend ;)
     
    rovad, Aug 16, 2011 IP
  5. Joe F

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    A Sales page is a huge factor on your online business sucess. Hire a professional to do it......
     
    Joe F, Aug 16, 2011 IP
  6. DanJacobs

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    Thanks for the replies guys!
    Yes i know i need to drastically improve the sales page, hence the thread, re: adsense - doesn't the ads go on all pages as i really don't want adsense on the sales page but i havn't got a clue how to remove it.

    I can ad a promo video to the SP which may help but regards to hiring a professional, i'm unemployed and extremely broke so thats not an option unfortunately.

    I'll check out some sales pages for high gravity sites for some tips.

    Thanks
     
    DanJacobs, Aug 17, 2011 IP
  7. gmcdonald

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    Good share,

    Two thumbs up on being blunt but helpfull Rovad..
     
    gmcdonald, Aug 17, 2011 IP
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    you need to hire someone to get done a nice salespage..

    if you have have nice sales page you may get some JV's to promote your products..
     
    galaxycoder, Sep 4, 2011 IP