i need some help =[

Discussion in 'Websites' started by ly2, Jan 23, 2006.

  1. #1
    i need someone who really knows SEO.
    i have been screwing around with seo the last few months and im starting to get really frustrated. i will do whatever you want, cash, work, links, anything. just need someone to spend a few minutes with me and tell me what exactly im doing wrong. i mean, im doing OK, but i dont want ok, i want good!

    here are some of my sites if you wanna check them out:

    http://textmessage.cc
    http://ly2.com
    http://custom-cabinets.org
    http://jwpincorporated.com

    all content (words and paragraphs etc.) are unique. except ly2.com template, thats from templatemonster.

    any ideas on what i am doing wrong?
    =[

    MSN is pretty under control, i seem to have issues with google and especially yahoo. any help would be very helpful!

    thanks everyone.
    -Barry
     
    ly2, Jan 23, 2006 IP
  2. Basoone

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    #2
    http://textmessage.cc is a nice domain name (from overture 1,535.5/day). Put your css to a .css file because bots cant read them.
     
    Basoone, Jan 24, 2006 IP
  3. dave487

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    #3
    How old are the domains and what keywords are you targetting.
     
    dave487, Jan 24, 2006 IP
  4. Immorta

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    Only looked at one of the sites "http://textmessage.cc" but the coding on that one site is appauling...

    You need to do some serious on page optimisation e.g.

    Title: You title is way too long, 5 words maximum is ideal.
    Meta: The tags are not correctly formatted...

    Other problems include the on page CSS, from what I can tell you dont have any H tags on the page to show title text etc.

    Your site does have a reasonable amount of inbound links / linking sites however, you just need to make sure the on page content and the source reflect what you are trying to market / target the pages keywords towards.

    The last real major problem I can see is the on page text.

    See below...

    keyword word count %
    the 11 6.62 %
    message 9 5.42 %
    to 9 5.42 %
    color 7 4.21 %
    phone 6 3.61 %
    text 6 3.61 %
    send 6 3.61 %
    cell 4 2.4 %
    please 4 2.4 %
    of 3 1.8 %

    The %'s dont seem so bad at first view but the majority of the keywords are from the adverts on the website... You should try to add some more content and tone down the adverts a little bit.
     
    Immorta, Jan 24, 2006 IP
  5. dave487

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    Also I tried to send a text to my Uk Orange phone and it never arrived......
     
    dave487, Jan 24, 2006 IP
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    Yeah i found this site to be really helpfull webconfs.com its a great resource i used it to gain a better idea on what was going on with my page assuredmedical.com check it out
     
    Assured99, Jan 31, 2006 IP