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I need some feedback for my webdesign!

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by cabrion, Mar 1, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hello!

    I am pretty new in the webdesign world.
    I started to do some designs for 2-3 weeks now and I have some doubts about the fonts.
    Some people say that the font isn't good if you want to read, or even that the font isn't good because they coundn't read what I have wrote.
    So I need some feedback regarding the font but not only, i am happy to receive some ideas for other categories, all of your ideas will be apreciated!

    Thank You very much!:)
    Cabromat
     

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    adicted0980 Peon

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    #2
    The background color is good. Overall a nice design :)
     
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  3. Mentalhead

    Mentalhead Active Member

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    #3
    Quite creative, can't wait to see it in action :)
     
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    typingmums Well-Known Member

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    #4
    I think it looks great - very professional - good work!
     
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    longcall911 Peon

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    #5
    I see only an image of your site. Is it up and running somewhere? We really can't offer an opinion on a screen capture only. Can you post a link?

    /*tom*/
     
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  6. GWiz

    GWiz Peon

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    #6
    Although I like the idea you have with the menu, i personally think that you have a huge waste of space at the top right. I would find a way to rework the header aspect so that the menu is moved into that top right area, thus allowing the content to be moved up.

    The layout of your content is ok, but for god sakes please use a normal font. You can use your custom font for certain titles, but would highly recommend you use a regular font (arial, verdana, tahoma, lucida) for actual text for the sake of not looking too goofy.

    I would also consider trying rounded corners. Maybe consider a 80% opacity on your elements.

    Good start nonetheless.
     
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    vabs Well-Known Member

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    #7
    Its simple and good but my point is to add some more colors and effects and make it better. It will really great if you do that.
     
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    arunmaniaswin Well-Known Member

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    #8
    its really fantastic,desing allover with in 2 weeks time..eye grabbing to ur effort,..
     
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    pammi388 Peon

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    #9
    Header part is simple and add some more colours.Overall a nice design!
     
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    #10
    Overall design has good, and looking is fantastic, all color are eye catching, fonts size also ok, marks is 100.
     
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  11. cabrion

    cabrion Peon

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    #11
    It's not yet on the web.
    Now I try to see what people thing about the design, and than I will do some modifications.
     
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    cabrion Peon

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    #12
    Thank You for the oppinions, I will definitly make some of the moves you said, especially the replace of the font.
     
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  13. cabrion

    cabrion Peon

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    #13
    Well let's say that this website will be a little serious, not very fancy and colourfull, because I want to be quite relaxing for the viewer.
     
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  14. OhJay

    OhJay Peon

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    #14
    Your main problem with the font is that it isn't a widely available system font, so either only you are going to see the website look like that whilst it defaults to a system font for everyone else or you're going to have to use images for all your text, sifr or wait for @font-face to be properly adopted.

    Using it for headers is fine, but stick with a more common font for body text.
     
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  15. deathshadow

    deathshadow Acclaimed Member

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    #15
    Very pretty - but until you code it as a website some goofy scaled down picture is pretty much meaningless - especially since you cannot rely on everyone getting the same size or even face of font.

    I would be concerned if all you have is the pretty picture that you are forcing yourself into a fixed width layout with fixed metric (aka px) fonts - the pinnacle of accessibility /FAIL/.

    But again, I consider drawing a pretty picture in some goof assed paint program to be having the web design process completely flipped around backwards - code the content using semantic markup, bend the markup to your will using CSS to create the layout, THEN start up your goofy paint program to make graphics to hang on the layout.
     
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    #16
    that is too creative and welcome to web designing world
     
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    #17
    Really nice design, and the background is very attractive.
     
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    Lordo Well-Known Member

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    #18
    I like the design but try this:
    Make fonts regular (not bold) and increase them by 1 or 2 pixels in size.
     
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    #19
    Like a post above said, that top right corner is a bit wasted. Maybe scale down the header a bit and move the nav bar above or in the header? The fonts do need to be regular as this can cause problems and it also looks a bit amateur. Other then that the layout and color scheme is fantastic. It would be nice to see this live though.
     
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    #20
    i think need work on background
     
    cyberianbrain, Mar 2, 2010 IP