I need major help with my short sales page :(

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Submerged, Jul 28, 2008.

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    I just launched a new site, http://www.BillionDollarTraffic.com, and I have a feeling that the sales page isn't working so well. I intentionally made it much shorter than most (it's three paragraphs instead of 30 pages), which I hope will tell people that I respect them enough to just tell them the facts and let them decide. Anyways, the information I'm hoping to convey is this:


    It's set-up is initially like a basic MLM -- you refer people, they join your downline, and you get traffic based on you downline.

    Three differences:
    1. There's a sixteen level downline.
    2. You get a view from every member of your downline every week.
    3. To "pay" for it you just have to view five minutes of ads a week. Beyond that it's completely free to use.

    There's a forum as well that would be awesome to get a community going with as well.

    Any thoughts on how to phrase or style it better

    Thanks for any help!
    -Alex

    http://www.billiondollartraffic.com
     
    Submerged, Jul 28, 2008 IP
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    sitebizz Peon

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    Well, only shows the godaddy parking page?
     
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  3. Submerged

    Submerged Active Member

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    Yeah, I decided to take it down and do some work on it for now, I might be changing it significantly. For now I don't need anymore help I guess. Thanks though!
     
    Submerged, Jul 28, 2008 IP