I just launched a new site, http://www.BillionDollarTraffic.com, and I have a feeling that the sales page isn't the best writing ever done. I intentionally made it much shorter than most (it's three paragraphs instead of 30 pages), which I hope will tell people that I respect them enough to just tell them the facts and let them decide if they wish to use the site. Anyways, the information I'm hoping to convey is this: It's set-up is initially like a basic MLM -- you refer people, they join your downline, and you get traffic based on you downline. Three differences: 1. There's a sixteen level downline. 2. You get a view from every member of your downline every week. 3. To "pay" for it you just have to view five minutes of ads a week. Beyond that it's completely free to use. There's a forum as well that would be awesome to get a community going with as well. Any thoughts on how to phrase or style it better? Thanks for any help! -Alex