i need help

Discussion in 'Websites' started by norfa, Dec 27, 2022.

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    I wrote a blog on Augmented Reality. I have used targeted keywords but it didn't get organic traffic. Please review it and let me know which area I am lacking.:oops::(
    this is my blog url: https://itsolutionprovider133902615.wordpress.com/2022/10/20/augmented-reality-app-development-company-2022/
     
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  2. alamlinks

    alamlinks Well-Known Member

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    use to make back link and use social media like tweeter for your traffic. i hope you will get as you want.
     
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  3. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    I'm not sure how Google checks for fluff but this headline ticks all my boxes
    I'm sure that "every" is true and what is "The Limelight", your use of caps makes it look like a place, rather than a concept.

    Are Next Games in the limelight or do they not count since they've announced they're killing their app? You mention Pokemon Go, but ignore the shortlived AR games Niantic have had in the 6 years since PGo launched.

    Do you get anyone to proofread your articles? How did dabble get past them?
    I normally complain that these articles explain too much. This time I could do with a definition of superimposition, or a link to another article that talks about it.

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    #2 would come after you've selected your company, surely?
    #4 means what exactly? How do you enjoy all the benefits if you haven't even started development yet?

    I know what you're trying to say, but really???

    I'd be very worried that your text doesn't pass some grammar checker that Google is running. It's not a great article, I'd recommend starting over.

    One final thing, how committed are you to this link structure? I don't mind the year being in there but the month and date seem unnecessary - and the word "blog", really? you couldn't come up with a better word, even "articles", "advice", or "opinion" would be better. upload_2022-12-27_11-29-28.png
     
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  4. norfa

    norfa Greenhorn

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    Thank you, I will work on these.

    i did such activities
     
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  5. deathshadow

    deathshadow Acclaimed Member

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    Site reeks of black hat SEO dirtbaggery. In particular the endless mindless keyword stuffing and redundancy should be triggering the "duplicate content penalty" getting you pimp slapped clean off of search.

    This is why so many ALLEGED SEO "experts" are full of shit.

    See the sheer number of times you say "augmented reality" on that page. No less than fifty freaking times! This mental midgetry alone:

    Of word jumble bullshit is likely why your page isn't doing well for traffic.

    Remember what Matt Cutts told us nearly twenty years ago: Write for the user, not the search engine.

    You have poorly written artificially keyword stuffed copy, OF COURSE you're not getting organic traffic!!!

    I mean take a garbage run-on like this: Not that I know anything about writing run-on sentences...

    Good rule for writing for actual people? Don't say the same damned thing over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again. Especially in the same bloody sentence! Don't repeat things you said in the heading. Don't repeat things in your headings one heading to the next! See your headings?

    You already established your talking about Augmented reality, app development, and so forth in the first heading (what should be the first H2 in the markup... it isn't). All those headings repeating that make your content read like junk, and will get you penalized by search in the long term. No matter how many know-nothing scam artists will try to sucker you claiming the polar opposite!

    You may wish to consider hiring a professional writer to punch up your copy.

    The shit show of developer ignorance, incompetence, and ineptitude common to turdpress templates not doing you any favors either. DIV soup, endless pointless classes for nothing, static style and scripting in the markup that has zero business in the markup... hardly a shock it ends up pissing away 161k of markup for 7.8k of plaintext and ONE content media -- not even 16k of HTML's flipping job. Much less the 240k of CSS in ten files when no legitimate website needs more than 48k of CSS in one file per media target (not counting font embeds) or the outright batshit insane 3,37 megabytes of "JavaScript for nothing" on pages I wouldn't even waste JavaScript on in the first place.

    Sad for such a relatively simple layout. 4 freaking megabytes of code in 70 separate files doing the job of probably 64k in three to five files. That's why "off the shelf" answers don't work. They're ineptly built scams. If it was this easy to take some prebuilt garbage like turdpress, sleaze some badly written content into it repeating the same words over and over to "game the system" and suddenly be a success was actually a thing, everyone would be doing it and be worth millions.

    Reality doesn't work that way.

    From a UX standpoint the "extra info on the right" is inconsistent with how heat tracking shows western users using sites, that could be a turnoff. The headings feel too large whilst the thin-glyph "franklin" font compromises legibility on everything except crApple products. (since Apple loves their "let's make everything twice as bold and blurry font rendering)
     
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    deathshadow Acclaimed Member

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    Oh, also reading that article you might want to ease up on the glittering generalities, card stacking, and credibility omissions.

    Take:

    WHO'S statistics? You say stuff like that but provide zero corroboration.

    Same for unfounded claims like:
    Missing that the "metaverse" is a running gag that normal people view as a stupid impractical gimmick, and hardly something people are standing around the water cooler discussing. If anything it's sliding into obscurity as it fails to deliver on promises, causes major accessibility issues, and reeks of trying to take advantage of the gullible who think how computers are portrayed in 1980's hollyweird movies like Tron or The Lawnmower Man, or on bad modern TV shows like CSI or NCIS is real.

    Which is akin to thinking Top Gun realistically portrays air combat, when they only get two things right. It takes place in the air, and if in the Navy it may occasionally involve homoerotic volleyball.

    Same for warm and fuzzy bullshit bingo that doesn't actually say anything. You're so laden with marketspeak doubletalk and bullshit bingo, Steve from Gamers Nexus would be asking "But what does that mean?"



    Bottom line, content is king. Yours is garbage fluff of little to no value.
     
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  7. norfa

    norfa Greenhorn

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    Thank you for the clarification. I definitely have to work on the writing and I will definitely work on the points you mentioned above. Would you suggest me some SEO techniques for a 1150 word blog. Which I should follow. Thank you
     
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