I wanted to promote this product on clickbank but I'm hesitant because I'm not too sure if its good. The website is http://truesixpackabs.org/ Can anyone give me some feedback about the product? Any advice on the design and copy? I currently offer 60% commission on the product here http://www.click2sell.eu/affiliate_page.do?productId=10387 (this is not an affiliate link)
OK, firstly this is the Clickbank section (and your product is click2sell.eu), so this shouldn't be posted here, but still I would like to make a few comments on the page: 1) I like how you have an exit popup (does convert sales) 2) This headline is captive, that's good! 3) Make the header design a bit more clearer, and I recommend you don't put tabs/navigation bar at the top because it veers off potential buyers from the main pitch page (put these at the bottom) 4) The copy is too short (extend it (e.g. persuasion)), but I could be wrong 5) Maybe put a video or something at the top? Hope this helps!
The site is good, but some more copy is a major issue you should address and as said already move the navagition to the bottom just your headline should be at the top. Best of luck.
I think the OP was asking whether the product was suitable for clickbank or not... Anyway, I would say that it looks pretty good, and that it's probably suitable for clickbank. It's a competitive niche, of course. One thing that I might suggest is that you have a countdown timer instead of just saying "this offer expires in xx number of hours" at the bottom. Personally, I really hate popups, although I understand they convert well and a lot of clickbank products do use them.
Hi Joshua, In my opinion, this isn't suitable as it stands for Clickbank and won't attract serious affiliates. You need to change a few things. (Bear in mind that 20% of your affiliates will always produce 80%+ of your affiliate sales (often 90%+), and it's these "serious affiliates" I'm talking about). (i) The earnings per sale put it below many serious potential affiliates' lower e.p.s.-thresholds, so you'll need to increase either the price or the commission percentage (remember that Clickbank take 7.5% + $1 and the affiliates get their percentage on the remaining figure after both those deductions) (ii) I see comments above about an "exit pop-up". I can't find, or see, an exit pop-up at all on your site. But if there is one, you're going to need to remove it, to attract serious affiliates at Clickbank, if (a) it offers a discount, or (b) it collects the prospect's email address: obviously nobody wants to become an affiliate for a "leaky sales page with an opt-in". (Since I can't see it, even after several visits to the page, I can't comment further. Maybe you already removed it?) (iii) For Clickbank purposes, you'll need to remove the link to "my blog" at the bottom of the page (I think probably you know this already?) because of course that also makes it a "leaky sales page" (iv) The sales copy will need some changes, for two reasons: (a) there isn't enough of it, and no real, convincing testimonials, and there are a huge number of apparently similar products on Clickbank against whom you'll be competing for affiliates with much better sales copy and higher earnings per sale too, so as it stands now the deck is really stacked against you; (b) you need to check - since the enforcement changes of 1st December - that everything is FTC-compliant (v) The threat of a price increase in 48 hours is frankly derisory, and you should lose it immediately, whether you stay at Click2Sell, migrate to Clickbank, or both. It's not something that anyone takes seriously, these days: potential customers or serious potential affiliates. It just reeks of "false urgency" and makes people think you're trying to fool them. When you're trying to sell something to someone, the last thing you want them to think is that you're trying to fool anyone!! As testing of this sort of thing reliably and repeatedly shows, it will actually lose you more sales than it gains. It would be the first thing a professional copywriter would change in your copy. And if anyone checks back 48 hours later and sees the same price and reports it for "deception", then obviously and understandably it can get you into real trouble, too - which is also very off-putting to professional affiliates. (The headline could do with some work, too). If you have a look through the Clickbank marketplace, searching under "fat", looking for similar products, and take a look at 20 or 30 of your competitors' sales pages, I think you'll have a much better of what you're up against, and you'll quickly appreciate why this wouldn't attract professional affiliates or make many sales as it stands now. Good luck!
You think an exit pop-up that offers a discount really turns affiliates off? If someone is leaving they likely weren't going to purchase, either because they simply didn't want the product, or because it was too expensive. Offering a discount, I think, really gets some people to buy. Personally, as an affiliate I would much rather receive a lower commission rather than no commission at all.
On the contrary, in my opinion: the overwhelming majority of people who buy don't do so at their first visit to the sales-page but subsequently. The one reliable outcome of a discount exit pop-up is that not one of those people (some research suggests it's on average 87% of purchasers) will ever pay the non-discounted, original price. Nobody's questioning that. It can get some people to buy, who wouldn't otherwise have bought, and still cost you a lot of net takings over the long term. So would I - this isn't in dispute. But I'd rather have a higher commission from the great majority than a "small sale as opposed to no sale" from a small minority. Like many people making their living from affiliate promotions, it stops me from being potentially interested in a product.
I suppose that your argument relies on the fact that those who make the purchase buy on a subsequent visit (If possible, can you provide me with this research?). In this case, you're correct. They would be aware of the discounted price and not purchase at the regular price. There are, however, pop-up scripts that allow you to cookie that visitor so that the discounted offer only appears once, so that on a subsequent visit it would not appear again. In this case, would they refuse to purchase at the original price? (this is assuming the buyer will return and try to reactivate the pop-up with the discounted price)
Er ... umm ... well ... let's see: I started my reply by saying "the overwhelming majority of people who buy don't do so at their first visit to the sales-page but subsequently." So, that would be a "yes". I knew that you would (very reasonably!!) ask this, and I can't immediately find it, but I think I bookmarked it and will look more tomorrow (I have nearly 1,000 pages bookmarked, though, and not exactly neatly arranged, so no promises - apologies if necessary! ). Surely they would? I would. Wouldn't you? I'd log on from another PC to get the discount again. Or just clear my cookies and try again (and that would lose the affiliate commission entirely, at any price, wouldn't it?! It gets worse and worse, doesn't it?) That's not assuming much. If they know they can buy it for $19.99, they're not going to pay $29.99 for it, are they?!
Logging on from another PC or clearing your cookies to receive the discounted offer again requires knowing that you're not being served the discounted price because you're cookied. Does the average user really know this, or do they simply think they've missed the sale? Secondly, if I want something, a ten dollar difference isn't going to stop me from making the purchase. I'll just buy at the original price. Ten dollars isn't going to break most people. Lastly, your condescending tone is not appreciated. I'm sorry if my language is not as precise as you'd like it to be, or if I've repeated something that you've already stated, but we're posting on an IM forum. We're not writing dissertations. There is no need for your smug comments.
A few comments... You have a great domain name for the product. Make the sentences appear shorter. You can get into troubles if you really don't have 'Fatloss Pro Formula' trademarked.
I don't know. The way I select products for which to be an affiliate, I don't have to worry about stuff like that. Convince me that that's true of 87% of online buyers and I'll take the point seriously. Meanwhile, why should I worry? There are tens of thousands of products on Clickbank to choose from. Who needs to worry about these problems?! Condescending?! Unreserved apologies if that's how I came across: I thought it was a good-natured, good-humoured conversation and that was my intended tone. It never occurred to me at all that what I said was open to the potential interpretation of being "condescending" (and to be honest I still can't quite see it now, even with the benefit of hindsight!), but in any case I'm very glad you mentioned it, if you felt that way, so I could clarify that!
I have revamped my sales letter, I think it looks very good. I need someone's opinion. Thanks in advance for your reviews