I need feedback. Your opinion, please.

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by webgal, Sep 15, 2008.

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    Freelance Copywriter Print Ad portfollio

    I just updated this page. It will be easier to add new things.

    This is the old one. It was hard to update and add to the picture. I can still do that, however.

    http://annemoss.com/Image_map.shtml

    I've been wrestling for two days whether to make the new one two pages (the first link) or do a long photo for the old page (add to it). So I thought I'd ask the copywriters. I don't get print ad work much from the internet. I usually get that work locally or from agencies and corporations I've worked with or have ties to. I don't know if that will factor in your thinking but I thought I'd throw that out there.

    At any rate, I'd like your opinion because my head is in a vacuum over it.
     
    webgal, Sep 15, 2008 IP
  2. lightless

    lightless Notable Member

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    The new one is fine. Make it two pages and make use of the empty space on the right.
     
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    Thank you. So make the page wider?
     
    webgal, Sep 16, 2008 IP
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    lightless Notable Member

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    Yeah. When in doubt, go with your gut feeling [Whatever that is]. Generally works for me.

    Oh and whatever happened to your woman's intuition. :confused::D
     
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    I have lots of women's intuition. But sometimes I need opinions. Thank you.
     
    webgal, Sep 16, 2008 IP
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    I like the new one. Although I think it's a little too long. Hate to scroll, don't you? So I agree with making it 2 pages. Good luck.
     
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    Thank you. I keep waffling on that one. I worry that some are too lazy to go to page two. Then there are SEO benefits to having two pages, too.
     
    webgal, Sep 17, 2008 IP
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    For what it's worth, I think the new page is much better than the old image map - as well as, presumably, several hundred percent easier to maintain?
     
    ceemage, Sep 17, 2008 IP