I need a review for my squidoo lens on how to make software and profit from it

I need a review for my squidoo lens on how to make software and profit from it. Any feedback is appreciated and I would like to know how much the lens makes you want to buy the product.

http://www.squidoo.com/how-to-make-money-and-profit-from-it

Thanks

 

I don't particulary like your opening line "I am going to write an unbiased review", but if you like it that's fine. I can't really see that much wrong with it. Nice job!