I lie awake waiting for you.

Discussion in 'General Chat' started by checksum, Apr 20, 2007.

  1. #1
    As I lie on my bed, thinking about you, I feel this strong urge to grab you and squeeze you, because I can't forget last night.

    You came to me unexpectedly during the balmy and calm night, and what happened in my bed still leaves a tingling sensation in me.

    You appeared from nowhere and shamelessly, without any reservations you lay on my naked body... You sensed my indifference, so you applied your hungry mouth to me without any guilt or humiliation, and you nearly drove me crazy until you drained me.

    Finally I went to sleep.

    Today when I woke up, you were gone. I searched for you, but to no avail, only the sheets bore witness to last night's events.

    My body still bears faint marks of your enthusiastic ravishings, making it harder to forget you.

    Tonight I will remain awake waiting for you...... you fucking mosquito.

    --

    Haha. :D
     
    checksum, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  2. BLaZeR

    BLaZeR Peon

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    #2
    Eh,kinda predictable but funny none the less.
     
    BLaZeR, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  3. bacanze

    bacanze Peon

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    #3
    haha, nice poem rep left :D
     
    bacanze, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  4. 8everything

    8everything Peon

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    #4
    HAhahaha... could have been sick :p

    mosquito aren't even a huge problem in Ontario.. try going to Manitoba! lol
     
    8everything, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  5. jdR!pper

    jdR!pper Peon

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    #5
    Nice poetry... :D I hate mosquitoes... they can cause people to get sick... :mad:

    --Joe
     
    jdR!pper, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  6. uttoransen

    uttoransen Prominent Member

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    #6
    nice poem! i enjoy reading it! but then the f word is always risky and people get infractions for that! if you can, try editing it!:rolleyes:
     
    uttoransen, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  7. EliteFlyers_com

    EliteFlyers_com Active Member

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    #7
    hahahah nice!!
    the suspence in this was amazing! lol
    made me laugh
     
    EliteFlyers_com, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  8. Colleen

    Colleen Illustrious Member

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    #8
    Damn, I wish I were a mosquito right now, sounds hot! :D
     
    Colleen, Apr 20, 2007 IP
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    AGS Notable Member

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    #9
    haha like it!
     
    AGS, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  10. prue187

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    #10
    Huhuhu! very touching I really cried till the very end :D Lol thought you were really a poet for real... That was a fine joke :D
     
    prue187, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  11. crowquill

    crowquill Well-Known Member

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    #11
    Very nice gag at the end. I hate Mosquito. This small creature diverts my concentration when Iam seriously working. Is there any permanent solution to eradicate them.
     
    crowquill, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  12. checksum

    checksum Notable Member

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    Nope, unfortunately they're an important part of the ecosystem. :(
     
    checksum, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  13. asfi

    asfi Peon

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    #13
    Its not good thing...
     
    asfi, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  14. crowquill

    crowquill Well-Known Member

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    #14
    True, I agree. Ecosystem is balancing environment. Let the mosquitoes enjoy on our bare body. :D
     
    crowquill, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  15. asfi

    asfi Peon

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    #15
    Saala ek Machar Aadmi ko hijda bana deta hai..
     
    asfi, Apr 20, 2007 IP
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    mitcharr Notable Member

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    #16
    hah very nice thanks fo sharing
     
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  17. Clive

    Clive Web Developer

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    #17
    Wait for the mosquoto to come back for more tonight, that's love ;)
     
    Clive, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  18. Computerized

    Computerized Well-Known Member

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    #18
    Lol, that's awesome! I totally expected something different. :D
     
    Computerized, Apr 20, 2007 IP
  19. Freelance GD

    Freelance GD Well-Known Member

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    #19
    huh! poor checksum :rolleyes:
     
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  20. BigBadWolf

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    Dude, tell me about summer time is just about to start and the mosquito's are already driving me mad!
     
    BigBadWolf, Apr 20, 2007 IP