I have redesigned my webdesigning website, plz review

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    Web designing website has been redesigned using wordpress As CMS.

    Please review it and send us your voluble feedback.

    http://meltingpx.com/
     
    kayapati, Aug 18, 2008 IP
  2. bodger

    bodger Peon

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    The site looks good. It's tidy and easy to use. I think you should change the big banner at the top of the page to something static, rather than random. One that I got was outdated and mentioned '2006'. Something like 'Click here to contact us for a quote" with a relevant picture would be good to put there, as it'd be in a prominent place.

    You need to go through the whole site and check your spelling and grammar. If you can't do it, hire somebody to do it. For example (this is near the top of the front page):

    The Client asked us to design a website where they can create, edit, delete pages, images and google ads easily from admin, so we chose Wordpress is is BEST for their needs.

    Should be:

    The client asked us to design a website where they can create, edit and delete pages, images and Google ads easily from an admin panel. We chose Wordpress as it's the BEST piece of software for their needs.

    It could still be better, but that's a quick cleanup. I would also think about changing your tagline under your logo. "Shaping Pixels for Making Profits" doesn't make too much sense, and it also sounds like your doing it to make profit for yourselves. Something like "Melting pixels into shape for you" would be more relevant to your website name.
     
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  3. kingofsanda

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    The site looks nice and clean and easy to navigate however, you should focus on fixing
    the grammatical errors in the content.
     
    kingofsanda, Aug 18, 2008 IP
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    Right below the polls, you could add a 160x600 Google adsense box or you could add affiliate programs for templates, hosting or other relevant web services. Clean design!
     
    augster, Aug 18, 2008 IP
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    4_reyes Active Member

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    cool site try making a more professional logo then its completely perfect
     
    4_reyes, Aug 18, 2008 IP
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    The only suggestion I have is the logo.
     
    cb711, Aug 18, 2008 IP
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    No you shouldn't ! If you are looking to get clients, there is no need to show them how to buy a template, hosting, or other products and services that you provide, for themselves.

    Nor should you put anything on your site that will send your visitors to do business with someone else.
     
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    SMcGuire45 Peon

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    Site looks good...need to proof read it over again though.
     
    SMcGuire45, Aug 18, 2008 IP