i finally made a poem

Discussion in 'General Chat' started by Western, Jun 3, 2008.

  1. #1
    ☻Nipple Nipple dont be far, can I press u in my car. Up
    above the chest so high, always milky never dry. Let
    me suck you, dont feel shy.
     
    Western, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  2. Simboy

    Simboy Peon

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    #2
    Take my advice. DON'T MAKE ANY MORE POEMS!
     
    Simboy, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  3. Buhawi

    Buhawi Well-Known Member

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    #3

    Great poem, bro!! :p
     
    Buhawi, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  4. indyeah

    indyeah Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Never try this at home or with your girl."parental discretion advised".
     
    indyeah, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  5. DarkX

    DarkX Peon

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    #5
    Yes! You've finally made your own little perverted poem...
     
    DarkX, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  6. atulperx

    atulperx Banned

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    #6
    Nice poem but only for adult blondes . Dont try this at simple girls or you will be like

    Madam Madam don't complaint yaar , Police will put me behind the jail Bar. Up
    above the case so high, They broken my legs and cloths are dry .
    Let me say sorry to you , because now i fell very shy .
     
    atulperx, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  7. mimm

    mimm Banned

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    #7
    Wow... Now I understand why some people said," There are two things that a poem writer must have, first is creativity and the second is trash bin.

    LOL
     
    mimm, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  8. Emie.

    Emie. Banned

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    #8
    You got the proportions off slightly.
     
    Emie., Jun 3, 2008 IP
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    EvcRo Notable Member

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    #9
    This is not a poem...but it can be a lack of creativity, aslo of good taste and maybe a good start for an adult movie...
     
    EvcRo, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  10. bagwell

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    #10
    We everybody must somehow start :D
     
    bagwell, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  11. atulperx

    atulperx Banned

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    #11
    In future we can find video songs in adult movies too , if people like bagwell work deep from their hearts . lol .
     
    atulperx, Jun 3, 2008 IP
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    seogoogle Well-Known Member

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    #12
    Thats Nice :p
     
    seogoogle, Jun 3, 2008 IP
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    infograb Active Member

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    #13
    Very Well Said..
    This will definitely goes to trash bin :D if any girl reads this..;)
     
    infograb, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  14. WysterianProductions

    WysterianProductions Peon

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    #14
    I don't think this is intended for another woman to hear, unless her interests include lame poetry.
    It looks to me like this nonsense poem is simply for self amusement. Sure fits the job!
     
    WysterianProductions, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  15. Western

    Western Well-Known Member

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    #15
    yes , but all girl over here in dp don't have such things . because of sitting too much infront of computer
    theirs are not above the chest so high (maybe on theri stomach) .
     
    Western, Jun 3, 2008 IP
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    #16
    BS.... That ain't funny!!! Say thanks to god that you are not standing in person in front of girls with this poem otherwise, we would have seen a comedy scene with some action of sandals and slaps... :D
     
    rockinfuture, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  17. Western

    Western Well-Known Member

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    lol , girls like to hear that but they just pretending they don't :D
     
    Western, Jun 3, 2008 IP
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    kanwarjot Notable Member

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    #18
    Good start :D but would have been better if it would have been some thing like a nursery rhyme than a 18+poem :)
     
    kanwarjot, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  19. Iman Bayi Super

    Iman Bayi Super Peon

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    #19
    There's something wrong in the way you think about girls mind, buddy.
    If you want them (in every way, in every meaning), respecting them is always be the first step!
     
    Iman Bayi Super, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  20. Western

    Western Well-Known Member

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    #20
    no way man , i just like myself
    this thread is a joke and that poem isn't mine definitely
     
    Western, Jun 3, 2008 IP