i finally got it up

Discussion in 'Websites' started by sanaa-s-1971, Nov 8, 2008.

  1. #1
    ya i got my great HOOKAH website up.
    i get these hookahs at wholesale prices and im selling them cheaper than other online stores..

    check it out at
    http://thehookahoutlet.com/
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    please give me a review on it thanks
     
    sanaa-s-1971, Nov 8, 2008 IP
  2. pctutorialsonline

    pctutorialsonline Peon

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    #2
    Well that's the first time I've seen the word "Hookah". Might want to add in the FAQ: "What is a Hookah?". Layout is clean and easy to navigate. Everything else seems pretty good to me. Good luck with it.
     
    pctutorialsonline, Nov 9, 2008 IP
  3. D-Yes

    D-Yes Peon

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    #3
    your layout looks professional..
    it's interesting..
    i have nothing to comment, becoz i think your site is completely can appeal the customers..
    :)
     
    D-Yes, Nov 9, 2008 IP
  4. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    #4
    The overall layout and design is good, the site looks nice.
     
    kingofsanda, Nov 9, 2008 IP
  5. aikido

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    #5
    I like it

    It looks like a Bong to me or hashish pipe

    I would add the word in your meta title tag

    the hookah outlet | Bong | Bongs

    that way you get rankings for bongs, bong

    add meta keywords - bong, bongs, hookah

    sing a song while you bong ok ding dong so long, time for ping pong or bang a gong...LOL

    black belt bob
     
    aikido, Nov 9, 2008 IP
  6. seoservicesfree

    seoservicesfree Peon

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    #6
    I think the site is nice and clean but needs better SEO.
    It doesn't pass w3c validation either and has some serious errors like

    
    #  Error  Line 405, Column 7: XML Parsing Error: Opening and ending tag mismatch: div line 66 and body.
    
    </body>
    
    
    # Error Line 406, Column 7: XML Parsing Error: Opening and ending tag mismatch: body line 65 and html.
    
    </html>
    
    
    # Error Line 406, Column 7: XML Parsing Error: Premature end of data in tag html line 2.
    
    </html>
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    If you need any help in SEO just PM me giving ref to this thread or visit SEOservicesFree.com
     
    seoservicesfree, Nov 10, 2008 IP
  7. Diet Pepsi

    Diet Pepsi Banned

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    #7
    Site layout looks good. Simple and clean. :D
     
    Diet Pepsi, Nov 10, 2008 IP
  8. saqistation

    saqistation Peon

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    #8
    congratulation man..
     
    saqistation, Nov 10, 2008 IP