I create logo...please look it.

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  1. #1
    Hi

    This is my 1st logo design.let me know is it good or bad.

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    Thank you.
     
    Last edited: Aug 23, 2009
    blackhunter250, Aug 23, 2009 IP
  2. chrisy.

    chrisy. Peon

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    Not bad although ill assume that was a typo as your missing the e on house. Also your fonts seem to not match on the right hand side is the deliberate though?
     
    chrisy., Aug 23, 2009 IP
  3. blackhunter250

    blackhunter250 Well-Known Member

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    Hi

    Sir I edit that mistake..so how is it? bcs I 'm new for logo design.
     
    blackhunter250, Aug 23, 2009 IP
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  4. sheryonline

    sheryonline Well-Known Member

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    #4
    as ur logo is about fashion house try some other font and also the colours the graphical representation u choose is nice
    the gap between the Fashion House is too much and also Tshrts,Bags and all dress should b at the bottom of the Fashion House it will help u Surely :)
    that was my opinion
    thanx
    Shery !
     
    sheryonline, Aug 23, 2009 IP
  5. seo_101

    seo_101 Peon

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    The concept is pretty good as well as the color contrast,. I just don't like the big white space,. It's was a bit annoying
     
    seo_101, Aug 23, 2009 IP
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    #6
    For me, lessen the white space and try using other fonts and color schemes to match your theme. The concept is very nice btw. Good luck buddy.
     
    thompson322, Aug 23, 2009 IP
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    I would put t-shirts, bags, all dress smaller underneath the main brand. It makes it too prominent and distracting from the main brand name.
     
    AvidBiometrics, Aug 23, 2009 IP
  8. soul_from_hellz

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    #8
    I think that logo is cool...
    I'am loving it.. ^^v
     
    soul_from_hellz, Aug 23, 2009 IP
  9. marcut

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    #9
    Blackhunter check PM
     
    marcut, Aug 23, 2009 IP
  10. professionals

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    Hi,
    very simple and decent desing.
     
    professionals, Aug 24, 2009 IP
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    Soner Active Member

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    Soner, Aug 24, 2009 IP
  12. aap

    aap Well-Known Member

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    #12
    Good concept...but I will suggest following changes.

    Height of logo is little more. Try to keep both lines horizontal.
    Decrease gap between "Fashion" and "House" words.

    Regards:
     
    aap, Aug 24, 2009 IP
  13. blackhunter250

    blackhunter250 Well-Known Member

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    #13
    ok..thanks for information for me. This is my 2nd Design,check it and tell your likeness.

    [​IMG]
     
    blackhunter250, Aug 24, 2009 IP
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    aap Well-Known Member

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    #14
    This looks very professional.
    You have improved your skill. Good work.
     
    aap, Aug 24, 2009 IP
  15. chrisy.

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    #15
    That does look alot better nice job.
     
    chrisy., Aug 24, 2009 IP
  16. cheesy

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    #16
    It looks much better :D Improving fast. I think your using too much text and it's getting distracting a bit ;) just somthing to think about.
     
    cheesy, Aug 24, 2009 IP
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    #17
    I like the logo looks good for !st attempt :)
    Dont really like the font used for the "T-shirts etc..."
     
    Drdrip, Aug 24, 2009 IP
  18. bruceslogos

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    #18
    Your logo is quite good but you need to change the color theme of your font so as it was make more attractive
     
    bruceslogos, Aug 24, 2009 IP
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    #19
    Well, honestly you've improved compare to the 1st logo that you made!
    Keep it up! :)
     
    netalab, Aug 25, 2009 IP
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    #20
    I would remove the "take your laptop anywhere in the world" line from the graphic. There's already too much text in there and it doesn't seem to add any new info.
     
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