I could use some advice on my hubpages article.

I'm trying to improve my writing skills a little and thought that writing articles on hubpages might be a decent way to do it. I just wrote my first hubpage and I don't know if there's room for improvement or not. The link is here: https://hubpages.com/money/Why-Bitcoin-wasnt-approved-by-this-SEC-and-why-the-community-doesnt-care, advice and criticism are welcome.

 

It had a great title, but the article doesn't exist anymore. What happened?

 

Not sure, I'll check it out.

 

Apparently it didn't get approved and was taken down temporarily. Guess it got the review I was looking for, just not from DP users. I'll try to make some improvements and see if it'll get improved.

 

Your article showed up yesterday, and it's gone again today. I assume bitcoin, forex and other similar topics trigger their spam filters.

 

Probably, I'm not very experienced in hubpages.