I cannot write ad corectly

Discussion in 'Co-op Advertising Network' started by chukov, Jan 19, 2005.

  1. #1
    My ad look like this

    Theme: Bussiness
    Language: English
    Anchor: Tires
    url: http://www.avtogumi.com
    Description: Lassa, Kumho, Yokohama, Fate, Bsa, Mangels, All Tech,tire, tyre, tires, tyres, alloy wheels, wheel, wheels

    Why my adds been Denied?
    I received explanation :
    "For text-based banner ads, make the descriptions long and useful for the users"

    But my Description is not short and not useless?
     
    chukov, Jan 19, 2005 IP
  2. dchoe

    dchoe Active Member

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    #2
    maybe they want a phrase/sentence rather than just keywords
     
    dchoe, Jan 19, 2005 IP
  3. chukov

    chukov Peon

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    #3
    Yes, but it is very short to me to insert phrase and brands which we represents.
     
    chukov, Jan 19, 2005 IP
  4. digitalpoint

    digitalpoint Overlord of no one Staff

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    #4
    It should be descriptive sentence(s), not keywords.
     
    digitalpoint, Jan 19, 2005 IP
  5. chukov

    chukov Peon

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    I corrected this and hope that everything will be OK.
     
    chukov, Jan 19, 2005 IP
  6. chukov

    chukov Peon

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    And what represent listbox near tothe "Delete Enable ADD"
     
    chukov, Jan 19, 2005 IP
  7. ViciousSummer

    ViciousSummer Ayn Rand for President! Staff

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    #7
    That is not a description. Those are just keywords and misspellings. Try something along the lines of:

    "Buy brand name tires and alloy wheels. We carry the best brand names such as Lassa, Kumho, Yokohama, Fate, Bsa, Mangels and All Tech."
     
    ViciousSummer, Jan 19, 2005 IP
  8. chukov

    chukov Peon

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    Tanks I'll try this description
    ;-)))
     
    chukov, Jan 19, 2005 IP
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    mochilero Peon

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    If you have the problem often, tell a friend what you want to say, and have them write it up.

    Steve
     
    mochilero, Jun 28, 2005 IP