I am new to clickbank , all my articles are getting declined. Please help

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by hornetss, May 8, 2008.

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    I submitted my articles to ezine and a few other companys and they all got declined. Please tell my whats wrong. Also they say "Problem: Sorry, we do not accept articles which contain affiliate or distributor links."
    (thats what ezinearticles.com said) I thought thats how you do article marketing, This is my exact article : Hello everyone, i am just letting you know about a method to loose weight that works. It is the same method that the military uses. I am 42 years old and i have been struggling with loosing weight for almost all my life. I have tried many products including: Chitosan, Ephedra, Guar gum, and Proactol. Some of the products say they decrease appetite. Some of them work to a degree. Green Tea pills worked for about 2 weeks and then every time i took them it gave me a sick feeling. The other pills made me loose 2-8 pounds then it all came back the second i stopped using them. Many people are getting these side effects. Diet pills was a bad idea because they are a big waste of money and they usually don't work. They also can cause severe side effects that can affect your health in the long run. One day i was doing research online and i found out this great program that worked for almost all those who have been struggling to loose weight for many years. It gives you a complete diet plan and all you have to do is follow the guide and don't cheat it you will shred the pounds and look great! I have been doing these methods for the past 4 months and went from 190 (I am 5'9) pounds to 165 pounds and i grew alot of muscle in the process. I really advise you to check out the very helpful method to loose all the fat and get ripped. Remember follow the guide very strictly and you will receive maximum results. Thanks to this simple guide i have lost over 25 pounds, have a small six pack, and feel great at age 42! All in 4 months!

    You can get the guide at: <p>You can get the guide at: <a here="" click="" for="" href="http://hornetss.cqcintl.hop.clickbank.net">Click Here for Guide</a></p>

    Tell me what to do to get my articles posted properly and any ideas on how i can make articles better? or come at articles at a different approach? Thanks for the help!!!
     
    hornetss, May 8, 2008 IP
  2. CrazyDictator

    CrazyDictator Well-Known Member

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    These kind of articles will never get accepted. Create a great article and have it point to your blog where the actual affiliate links are.

    Regards.
     
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  3. hornetss

    hornetss Peon

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    Could you give me a good example of how to write my articles then? thanks
     
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    NCMedia Well-Known Member

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    Sorry, we do not accept articles which contain affiliate or distributor links.

    1. Get a domain name - point the domain name to your aff link. Don't post aff links at ezine you will get rejected - the above is in plain english 'we do not accept articles which contain affiliate or distributor links'. It has nothing to do with your quality yet.

    2. Space out your read - your post was difficult to read because it's all clogged together, if your articles are like that - you won't get many readers that will want to read it all, it hurts the eyes when you do not format.

    3. I just started a good 'best advice' thread - read it again - good article marketing bit - also MANY great article marketing journal threads - take the time to read them - you seem to lack the fundamentals - do not pass go - start at kindergarten - no really!

    4. Read some of the top articles in your category - examine them - examine the headlines especially.

    You're almost there - however you need to understand that you can't just go plug hornetss.cqcintl.hop.clickbank.net everywhere - you're not the first that has tried - and for sure not the last - the web is FULL of endorsed sneaky reviews and ads pointing at money - the least you can do is hide it a little better and understand the fundamentals of why and how you must do this...

    Get your geNeRal eduMacation in the industry - once you master the basics you will be a much more dangerous - avoid it and you will run in circles for a loooooong time.

    N.
     
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  5. megarudy

    megarudy Active Member

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    To start you can go with CrazyDictator idea.

    Go get yourself a blog at blogger.com or wordpress.com or even livejournal.com. Make it look like a landing page, you know very simple and educative. It's nothing complicated all you have to do is to tell people what the product is going to teach them, show them or do for them. At the bottom of the page, write something like
    CLICK HERE TO LEARN MORE ABOUT THIS PROGRAM. Remember to hyperlink that sentence.

    Also if the product that you are promoting have some banners, you can upload some of them on the blog. Then when your blog is set up, go on EA, write your articles and send the readers to it( landing page). When you do that, you won't have any more trouble with EA.

    Please keep in mind that you can use squidoo, hubpages or bizsheet as a landing page but the thing with squidoo and hubpages, they have google ads on them so, you might lose some good potential buyers when you send them to one. Even though I do believe the buyers that you lose are the distracted one.


    Second option. The NC Media idea.

    This idea sound more professional because you will actually have your own domain for the product and people can actually reffer their friends to your domain name.
    but I will not recommend you to do it yet. I think if you are not sure that this product is going to be a big hit, you should just have your blog as a landing page for it.

    Then when you got 3 sales from this product, you can go get yourself a XXX.info------ cheapest one. I also believe that they are in sale right now.

    But in case that you want to go with NC idea but don't know how to do the forward thing, these are the steps that you need to follow

    -Go to your godaddy back office
    -Choose the option My Domains
    -Select the domain that you want to do the redirect thing
    -Click that little green arrow. I believe it's called forward
    -Check the option Enabled
    -Add the url that you want your domain to be forward to( you can even track it down)
    -then select the option masking
    -add your keyword and everything else
    -then press ok.

    It will probably takes up to 15 mn before the domain start working.


    Later on, if you want to turn the domain into a review site or a squeeze page, you can go get a program called dreamweaver MX ( google it) and learn from it. Keep in mind you can also forward your domain to your own wordpress or blogger.

    PS : your article should be educative, interesting and you have to make your readers want more.

    Hope that my post was useful to you. Anymore questions feel free to ask.

    This is one of my own article. http://fatrichpigscam.wordpress.com/

    Mega
     
    megarudy, May 8, 2008 IP
  6. hornetss

    hornetss Peon

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    Thanks for the help!
     
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  7. WilsonA

    WilsonA Active Member

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    look at other articles and see how articles are meant to be written.
    Also sign up for this free course at bummarketingmethod.com that
    would help explain everything to you
     
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  8. yebel89@gmail.com

    yebel89@gmail.com Active Member

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    Your article is a short paragraph and its purpose is clear: promoting a product - exactly what they don't want
     
    yebel89@gmail.com, May 9, 2008 IP
  9. rob33

    rob33 Well-Known Member

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    exactly, you cant be seen to be promoting a product, you can however do a an objective review of a product which promotes itself: i.e this product purports to define the means an individual can lose weight through the following techniques:
    1) ...
    2) ...

    probably not a very good example but get my drift!
     
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  10. rob33

    rob33 Well-Known Member

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    also, just received an email from travis the bum marketer, this might help, i'm sure he won't mind me promoting his tips:

     
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    grover69 Peon

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    Exactly. Give them tips or info, do not sell! That is a sure fire way to have EA not accept your articles. I know from experience!!
     
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    Yup, go and create yourself a blogger or wordpress.com blog and start write some educative/interesting review on your product.

    I think this will help you convert more sales in near future...

    Remember, Don't give up in the middle of your journey or you're won't even success at CB. ;)
     
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    rob33 Well-Known Member

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    Defo- I was feeling a bit despondent, but low and behold I sold my 1st dick stretcher after about a month since i started this campaign!

    Just keep at it, you never know when someones gona reach into their pocket!

    By the way, weener stretchers aren't CB but morenich(dot)com, $150 a return, not sure of conversion rates though, if interested you can type above address in or click on my link below!
     
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