I am confusing so much !!

Discussion in 'Websites' started by saw6, Jan 17, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hi Guys ,,,

    A lot of people said to me

    this blog : http://royalbusinessblog.blogspot.com/

    has difficult English !!

    and ti don't know if it true or not ?

    My Big Question

    The English of My blog is difficult to understand or NoT

    And thanks a lot to youuuuuuuuu
     
    saw6, Jan 17, 2010 IP
  2. ReformedSinner

    ReformedSinner Peon

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    #2
    You need to improve your English. The content doesn't make much sense to me.
     
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  3. saw6

    saw6 Peon

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    #3
    Yes Thanks a lot
    But why " The content doesn't make much sense to me. " ?
    you think it's old English ?

    Another Opinion !!
     
    saw6, Jan 17, 2010 IP
  4. yogesh22

    yogesh22 Peon

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    #4
    Its bad English really. No offense. Why don't you hire an article writer?

    Kind regards,
    Yogesh
     
    yogesh22, Jan 17, 2010 IP
  5. IraWeissman

    IraWeissman Greenhorn

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    #5
    It reads like a translated chinese instruction manual. it's completely incomprehensible.
     
    IraWeissman, Jan 17, 2010 IP
  6. thestrangefruit

    thestrangefruit Active Member

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    #6
    You mine as well copy and paste content from other sites... At least spin the content a bit, this is just horrible. How about taking a course in english? There are plenty online that are free.

    Good luck.
     
    thestrangefruit, Jan 18, 2010 IP
  7. saherboy

    saherboy Well-Known Member

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    #7
    i think improve your skills first
    and start with new ideas
     
    saherboy, Jan 18, 2010 IP
  8. HowardG

    HowardG Peon

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    #8
    Yes the English is not good, you need help from a good English speaker.
     
    HowardG, Jan 18, 2010 IP
  9. saw6

    saw6 Peon

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    #9
    ok
    i will destroy my blog
    thanks a lot

    But i want say thing .. i can speak and write english well
    But i used
    This bad re-writer : badarticle.com
    This is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo baaaaaaaad
     
    saw6, Jan 18, 2010 IP
  10. toomanyairmiles

    toomanyairmiles Peon

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    #10
    Hey, don't throw your blog away, keep trying. It's a tricky language here's an example...

    To get psyche, you have to be different from all the leftovers. Just imagine this: so many commerce cards spotted all over your butt client’s list and even the stagger. And all of them have one thing in customary- almost all the thing cards are in black and colorless. Except for 2 or 3 question cards. These few affair cards are printed with a smattering of tint. Which do you think would be able to spot your mark client’s thought?

    This could be written better as follows:

    To get attention, you have to be different from the competition. So many business cards are only printed in black and white, its hard to choose between them, even harder to find the one your looking for! Why not try full colour business cards, they easily stand out from the crowd and will help your clients remember you!

    This threads title for instance could be written in the following ways:

    I am very confused!!

    I am so confused!!

    Keep at it and you'll get there, you just need learn more words and the correct context to use them in.
     
    toomanyairmiles, Jan 18, 2010 IP
  11. InnocentKid

    InnocentKid Peon

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    #11
    hehe. i guess ur in trouble
     
    InnocentKid, Jan 19, 2010 IP
  12. armanjackson

    armanjackson Guest

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    #12
    You are in trouble. Com on friend, Leave all troubles and edit you blogs from writers who has fine catching on English.

    All the best.....
     
    armanjackson, Jan 20, 2010 IP
  13. roni07

    roni07 Guest

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    #13
    Ya, you should improve your English....it seems not so good..
     
    roni07, Jan 20, 2010 IP
  14. Kevin Shah

    Kevin Shah Active Member

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    #14
    Can look for article writers

    DP has unique article writers ofcourse :)


    check out at the services forum
     
    Kevin Shah, Jan 20, 2010 IP
  15. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    #15
    Not bad but hire a good english writers to promote the blog more..
     
    netdriver788, Jan 20, 2010 IP
  16. IT-EXPERT

    IT-EXPERT Peon

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    #16
    Don't be confused. Others' comments are right. But beautifully organized.
     
    IT-EXPERT, Jan 23, 2010 IP
  17. ashutoshdube

    ashutoshdube Active Member

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    #17
    As advised, get a content writer and get the job done.
     
    ashutoshdube, Jan 23, 2010 IP
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    #18
    As an English teacher, I would probably suggest that you stick to the level you are comfortable with. i think you are trying to use words you aren't sure about. Or, more likely, you are using Google Translate or something else on the web and getting bad translation....For example

    To get psyche, you have to be different from all the leftovers. Just imagine this: so many commerce cards spotted all over your butt client’s list and even the stagger.

    Not that we don't all need a good butt client now and then and certainly we all enjoy leftovers, particularly in our psyche! But you would do better with just this.

    Be different than everyone else. Imagine that you stood out.
     
    Vagobunny, Jan 23, 2010 IP
  19. Vagobunny

    Vagobunny Active Member

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    In truth, I love your blog. It is one of the most enjoyable I've looked at today. I'm going to send you a bit of traffic.
     
    Vagobunny, Jan 23, 2010 IP
  20. sneijder10

    sneijder10 Peon

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    #20
    Well, you did your best.
     
    sneijder10, Jan 23, 2010 IP