How's this for a headline...

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by imiconcepts, Dec 1, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi Everyone,

    I truely value and respect the opinions of my fellow marketers.
    I'm testing headlines for my survey site and I wanted to get an
    honest opinion.

    What do you think about this one:

    "Who Else Wants To Get Paid Cash
    & Rewards Taking Online Surveys...
    450 Companies Want to Pay You
    For Your Opinion!"

    Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated :)

    Thanks in advance!

    -Jay
     
    imiconcepts, Dec 1, 2009 IP
  2. Ryan6

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    #2
    Is this to be used as your meta description? If so then it'll need to be reworked...

    "Get paid to take free online surveys today. 100s of companies signed up already..."

    If you look at the bold text above, that's the kinda phrase that web users will naturally search for in Google. Have a look on the Adwords Keyword Tool to give you some more specific ideas.:D
     
    Ryan6, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  3. MoviesP.com

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    Instead of comanies, you should say how much money you can earn.
     
    MoviesP.com, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  4. Steve Powers

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    Of course they would like to know that.But you should give some really useful and valuable solutions if you want they believe you and would like to invest on your service.So what's that?
     
    Steve Powers, Dec 2, 2009 IP
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    Hi Jay.

    That's a great headline... just throw in the words: Quick & Easy and I promise you'll make even more money. People want solutions that are well "quick & easy" and when you mention it their desire increases dramatically!
     
    JamesKPowers, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  6. lightless

    lightless Notable Member

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    I'd change it to

     
    lightless, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  7. allwayslearning

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    When I see an someone promising an unreal amount of money with not explanation as to how it is made I don't click. Knowing how ti works is what makes me get involved because there are thousands of big buck offers so the difference needs to be how it works. I would rather make less money on something that will work and can grow than wasting money on a promise that is too good to be true,
     
    allwayslearning, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  8. MoneyHungry1

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    Don't ever over-hype what you are trying to promote. With a survey site, give them a little information on the types of surveys they will be taking and how much money they can make. Also, tell them how much time they have to put in to make the money.

    You open their eyes and let them know what it really takes rather than promising false hopes, you become more credible and trustworthy and people want to do business with you.

    It's a good headline. Just direct them to click for more information, give it to them, and send them to your offer.

    It should work perfect for you.
     
    MoneyHungry1, Dec 2, 2009 IP