Hows my landing page?

http://www.revolutiononlinemoney.com/

Thanks!

 

Short, sweet and to the point, I like it! Too often themes such as these have so much content people just scroll right through. Yours is short enough and content rich enough that it is easy to view and read.

 

Eye catchy layout, very simple and interesting. Keep up the good work.

 

Nice landing page. Maybe you should put a Need More Info section and then capture those that want more info about it.. Some people are sceptics and need to see more to make a decision.

Just my 2 cents

 

Very catchy. Did you made it yourself?

 

Not to offend, but it doesn't look like a million dollar site. Clipart style repeating background image. Doesn't look that professional or inspiring. However, the content is laid out well with clear progression and call to action.

 

what is the point of putting a car there !? anyway nice design

 

Yep!

Understandable. What type of background do you recommend though?

Marketing i guess?

 

Looks ok to me!

 

Good stuff! I read through the whole thing because it was compelling

 

Images are of too low quality (car and script writing).

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I sincerely hope that's not your official sales pitch! Because it's poor, and I quite frankly am sick of seeing those "make easy money fast" sales pages I feel like throwing up...99% of people who buy them crap are wasting their money!! FACT!!

However, you're design is a good foundation...and I guess you could build it up from there...