How's my first HTML layout looking?

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by Mr. Corey, Oct 23, 2009.

  1. #1
    This is the basic concept of it. Much too do.

    Do it look like i'm doing this right?

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    Mr. Corey, Oct 23, 2009 IP
  2. voslyn

    voslyn Peon

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    #2
    I like the colors, nice and simple.
     
    voslyn, Oct 23, 2009 IP
  3. techtricker

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    #3
    as this is your first effort, its good. keep it up. you can improve your self
     
    techtricker, Oct 25, 2009 IP
  4. Mr. Corey

    Mr. Corey Active Member

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    Here's an update

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    Mr. Corey, Oct 25, 2009 IP
  5. miziology

    miziology Active Member

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    #5
    nice man :)
    i like the logo n colors.

    good job Mr. Corey
     
    miziology, Oct 26, 2009 IP
  6. parmesh.a@gmail.com

    parmesh.a@gmail.com Peon

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    #6
    Use the first template menu color in the second template. then it will be eye cache
     
    parmesh.a@gmail.com, Oct 26, 2009 IP
  7. Bex7175

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    #7
    Hi there,

    For a first attempt this is great but can definitely be improved. Here's a few quick points that I think could help the overall look and feel:

    - The white font for the menu options isn't all that easy to read. I think if you were using the colours from your original design instead of the brighter yellow it might help with the readability but just a bit of experimenting with different colours and fonts could help. The font choice itself could probably be improved just to make it a bit more aesthetically pleasing.

    - This could be just personal preference but I'd actually quite like to see the cityscape on the right hand side expanded to cover more of the header area, with the text 'Visionary Listings' then above the city on the right. At the moment I think the layout seems a bit strange as the eye has two main focal points within the banner that its attention is drawn to.

    Hope those thoughts help. Keep going, you're doing really well. :)

    Bex
     
    Bex7175, Oct 26, 2009 IP
  8. MoneyMakingSystem

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    #8
    The Colours are great with a fantastic Logo...
    Keep up the Good Work :-D
     
    MoneyMakingSystem, Oct 26, 2009 IP
  9. techtricker

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    #9
    the update version is quit good man, thumbs up again
     
    techtricker, Oct 27, 2009 IP
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    #10
    it's nice..
    but maybe you can use other colour tone

    convertpsdtohtml.com
     
    ultraman7, Nov 6, 2009 IP
  11. DesignBytes

    DesignBytes Notable Member

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    Nice, but keep the bright factor a bit low :)
     
    DesignBytes, Nov 7, 2009 IP
  12. suerte enmi

    suerte enmi Peon

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    i thought it was nice :) i really like wide layouts. great job! :)
     
    suerte enmi, Nov 8, 2009 IP
  13. flyingwithoutwing

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    #13
    wow.. nice man..
     
    flyingwithoutwing, Nov 9, 2009 IP
  14. haydosrulz

    haydosrulz Guest

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    #14
    looks really good
     
    haydosrulz, Nov 9, 2009 IP
  15. BlackIceCreations

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    #15
    Good first effort and a great starting base.

    Finish it and get links for sponsors sold cheap then list on a number of free template sites.
     
    BlackIceCreations, Nov 9, 2009 IP
  16. coffeecup

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    #16
    Looking pretty good!!!

    Best regards,
    CoffeeCup.com
     
    coffeecup, Nov 13, 2009 IP