HowILost150pounds.com - Hottest New Product on Clickbank! Jump on it early

I appreciate the feedback guys Im going to try to improve things before putting this out there.

 

I think you have to improve your landing page design before asking affiliate to promote your products.

1.ebook cover
2.sales letter
3.alignment of pictures and words
4.where is buy now button? so small?

 

Now, that's an ugly site. You may consider to put adsense on that so people can get out in no time and make a fortune with adsense...

 

haha I love that song... requiem for a dream

 

One of the more uglier landing pages I've seen in recent times. Too many words. Didn't even read through the whole post. Make your landing page attractive as this is the first impression people will have about your product. If you can't even tidy up your landing page, I seriously doubt people will actually believe you tidied yourself up in 8 months. Just my 2 cents.

 

hey I appreciate the feedback. You mind showing me an example of a landing page you find attractive? I actually thought my site looked ok when compared to some of those extremely long, infomercial feeling sites I see on clickbank. I'd definitely appreciate an example or 2, or specific suggestions!

 

Either be professional about your business or let go.

To be honest you're not just wasting your time but other's too.

That landing page is one of the worst I've seen so far.

 

LOL. This is gold.

 

I agree with the others...very UGLY! And to be honest the guy on the pictures is also ugly, and your affiliates material is even uglier.

This will never work. Pay someone to do the page for you. Plus with so many good weight loss products, even with good page it will not work for beginner vendor!

 

Actually, I can see that he has put in a lot of effort in creating this product. However, I think he has not much experience in Internet marketing and that's why his landing page CMI!

 

You guys, I feel I can come out with a prroduct! Its just a feeling, it would be a challenging task, but the nonsense I am seeing being released on CB, I c an do better!...As a matter of fact

IN 2011 I AM GOING TO BRING OUT MY FIRST PRODUCT!

 

Thanks guys for the constructive feedback. I made a small mistake in asking my sister her opinion on the page instead of asking you guys first. I think I've improved it greatly and thanks a ton! May have to repost this thread because it will not let me edit my original post again.
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Hello guys. http://HowILost150pounds.com is a brand new clickbank ebook I've launched. It is incredibly well written, informative, UNIQUE, REAL and honest. A picture is worth a thousand words and no one can recognize who I am after the weight loss. This is a very high quality, authentic product that will motivate ANYONE to lose weight and transform their lives. When marketing to the target market, the before and after picture alone should have them sold. I dropped the weight in only 8 months, which is unheard of. This is not some articles thrown together off the internet; this is 100% original material from a real live breathing example. No Surgery, no supplements, no trainer, no pills etc, All Natural. Professionally put together book, website and checkout process.

This product is sure to be a big money maker, ONE OF A KIND!

Visit http://howilost150pounds.com for the sales page.

 

It does look better, and I applaud you for simply diving into the deep end however here's where you might have come short:

1. You have entered literally one of the hardest niches on the planet, with a single ebook for $40 = tough sell mate - especially in the non-tangibles for the diet niche.

2. Having the product ready, be it the best shit since sliced bread or not, needs testing. It's saddening to know that you had enough foresight to produce a product like this, get aff materials ready, do all this work and yet you don't test it just blindly launch it here hoping people become your guinea pigs and spend time/money promoting something that may well NEVER convert - like EVER. Not saying it to be rude but you gotta remember that you shoot yourself in the foot if you show up to market prematurely or don't do of your own conversions before asking aff's to jump on it.

3. Your page is really short both literally and on perceived value. Having simply one before/after pic and a vid is rarely going to be enough social proof to justify this price point. You might want to think about making it a $7 report with a heavier backend upsell, or take some good time on this position it properly. I have tried this niche twice now and dude it's insanely hard (feel free to inspect here and here < pull what you can out of them).

Your next step should be to spend some of your own money/time and convert the sucker, then show people here with proof/screenshots that it DOES convert, and show them how you did it. If I came on board right now as your affiliate, you wouldn't know how to support my needs, because you yourself don't have a clue on stats and are now going to wait until total newbs that don't filter products well to give it a shot for you - they won't convert on this the way you hope trust me.

Best of luck w/it.
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Didn't see the previous version but to me this still looks pretty amateurish, if you are serious then you should be forking at money to get a pro to do you a sales page instead of throwing up stuff like this. Weight loss is one of the most competitive niches on the market and if you expect affiliates to work their asses off to get you traffic you better make sure that you have a sales page that converts like mad......that one I believe won't even come close....

 

This page is significantly better than the original version. Which tells you how awful it was previously.

 

Better...but still million years far from what it should look like.