how to start a hosting company : please read

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by arjun316, Jun 6, 2008.

  1. #1
    ok hi everyone i wrote one great squidoo lens

    on how to start a hosting comany: http://www.squidoo.com/hostingcompany


    please rate this what do you think about it

    i would love to read reviews from you

    also commnets on my squidoo pages are also recommended
     
    arjun316, Jun 6, 2008 IP
  2. jdavidson

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    Hi,
    Just a quick browse shows up many grammatical errors.

    Changing 'i' to 'I' would help to make it look a bit more professional, but the general grammar is poor.

    You should maybe get a fluent english-speaker to proof read it for you.
     
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  3. JakeTheApe

    JakeTheApe Member

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    Format is good and colour scheme nice. Yes punctuation seems to be a problem. You will need to proof read your site.
     
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    ...and Capitalize your Headlines. I agree, you need some help on the Grammar. Other than that, it's really just a standard Squidoo Lens, nothing out of the ordinary.
     
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  5. CyberQuest

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    Where can I find that hosting script. Not completely in love with Hostgator, but I guess they are okay. I use SLHost.com...they don't crash like some of these other hosts that just started offering reseller accounts. Cool anyway though, but where can I find that auto hosting script?

    Thanks
     
    CyberQuest, Jun 7, 2008 IP