How is this site?

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by joey112, Jan 15, 2008.

  1. #1
    I made this site yesterday.

    Even though its in a competitive field. Was wondering what you thought.

    www.studyadviceforstudents.com

    ?

    Thanks guys, i really appreciate these honest reviews. It helps me get better.
     
    joey112, Jan 15, 2008 IP
  2. amanamission

    amanamission Notable Member

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    Your template is nice. There are several errors in the text, which are particularly troublesome in an education site; particularly an inconsistent use of capitalization. The second sentence is a fragment. And there are instances of apostrophe absence: "If its a school exam and your worried its" should be "If it's a school exam and you're worried it's".
     
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    ajsa52 Well-Known Member

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    I don't like the titles on left menu, because are not easy to read.
    Also IMO the font size of your main text is too big.
    And the page is too wide, it will show an horizontal bar on a 800x600 screen
     
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  4. WarzMX

    WarzMX Active Member

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    Website is too width, you should make it centered. You should remove the bold on main text and change the menu text since it's way too small. The site is very boring, you should add some pictures to cheer it up. And I personally hate it when I click the "e-mail" link and my computer almost freezes up because outlook is starting up and I don't use outlook which makes it a waste. I would rather make a contact page. Or a page listing your e-mails.

    Good luck
     
    WarzMX, Jan 16, 2008 IP
  5. Moin.Anjum

    Moin.Anjum Well-Known Member

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    Yes, need a change In my opinion. I think all the text is <strong> - bold! + the menus/navigation on left is very dull!

    MoiN
    www.AnewMorning.com
     
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    geme Banned

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    I don't like the design...it's very simple.
     
    geme, Jan 16, 2008 IP
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    videojerk Guest

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    please change fonts sizes, i can't read sidebar links (o.k. got bad eyes anyways). i'm sure your site will look much better and much more be read... think of: ease of use!
     
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    j.cardell01 Peon

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    I think the site's ok, but you need more content on it. I think I can write up some nice content for your site myself. I'll do this at a fixed rate of $0.07 p/word. Tell me how many articles you want and what titles, I'll get the ball rolling. Oh, and did I mention the increased traffic you will be getting?!! Yours is a good site nonetheless!
     
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    The left hand menu definately needs to be reworked. It is difficult to read and overlaps the innermost line.

    I would try different fonts for the main text as well
     
    SnowBear, Jan 16, 2008 IP
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    camp185 Well-Known Member

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    Looks like your other site, and had same problems with alignment, and left menu.
     
    camp185, Jan 16, 2008 IP