How is this for my first Squidoo Lens?

http://www.squidoo.com/make-money-online-17

I'd like to know where I can improve - I think I have too much info on there. Thats why I have added quite a few modules. Tell me what you think!

Thanks.

 

Your need a better (seo'd) intro, for a starter

 

I think you did a good job. The content that you have on it is very good

 

Alright - Thanks Scubita
Thanks SEOTherapy

 

Hello benderfry

You have lots of content,,,thats good...I would break the text into smaller pieces...or even create multiple lens, and link together.

What is your main goal for this lens? Information or Monetization

You can do much more to optimize this lens...keywords in module titles, and bio sidebar for example

Also you can make use of anchor links to direct readers where you want them to go next

Hope that helps some

 

Thanks - That does help! I will keep that in mind for future reference.

 

Good lens with lots of content.I would add more pics and perhaps an opt in box so people can subscribe for your newsletter.

 

Alright - How would I go about promotion?

 

I suggest you to get a someone to write a review on their blog for you. It is usually very easy to get high ranking using Squidoo lenses. So maybe you need to check the keywords density that you have on that lens.

Create more lens and link them together if they're related.

 

Social bookmarking will help u a lot

 

Hello benderfly

Write a 250 word article with a strong call to action, and submit to ezinearticles.com....direct your visitor to your squidoo lens AND your domain name/affiliatepage....check out this website advertizing article

Hope that helps

 

Go to where the people that you are targetting hang out. Social media sites will help you a lot in here. Sites like Twitter never fails in promotion.