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How is my writing?

Discussion in 'Blogging' started by Wyla, Aug 14, 2007.

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    Hey,
    Can you guys check out my blog and tell me if my writing style is okay?

    Is it readable? or does it make you exit the site?

    My bounce rate is extremely high - perhaps due to low traffic - but I thought it might also be my writing.

    Thanks
     
    Wyla, Aug 14, 2007 IP
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    frankcow Well-Known Member

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    It's taking an incredibly long time to load. That may lend to your bounce rate.

    Your writing seems to be perfectly fine though.
     
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  3. Wyla

    Wyla Active Member

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    Ah. Will try to transfer servers then. Thanks for the input.
     
    Wyla, Aug 14, 2007 IP
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    Your blog is loading fine for me :)

    As for your content, maybe you would want to improve on your sentence structure..
     
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    Wyla Active Member

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    Could you give me an example?
     
    Wyla, Aug 14, 2007 IP
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    I kinda like how you do your writing. It seems pretty informative.
     
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    Wyla Active Member

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    Thanks. I try to be informative but sometimes I think its too informative and reads like a text book. I'm trying to through in a pun or quirk now and then though.
     
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    KC TAN Well-Known Member

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    People like active sites, and what better way for a person to tell if a blog is active other than comments.

    can be improved to:

    People like to visit active sites. What are some of the better ways for a person to tell if a blog is active other than the comments?

    Just my 2cents.
     
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    Ah. Will have to get a friend to read the post before publishing.
    Thanks
     
    Wyla, Aug 14, 2007 IP
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    Can u PM me how u got the list on the left. All those subscribe features. I have blogs with blogspot, and i want that toolbar. Pm me please. Many thanks
     
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    I am the same way Wyla... I am not sure if my writing is the best but I am working to become more creative and actually be able to let my writing adjust on its own. The main guideline I keep in my vocabulary today is to make my writing understandable. That means, the wording to decribe something is in a manner that is easy to understand.

    Just let yourself flow, you'll adapt from there.
     
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    the style is good I like it and it definitely doesn't make me wanna close the site. This is so thanks to the topics that your blog covers.
     
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    Ah. Great advice and I'm checking out your blog too :D

    Why thank you. I try to write about topics that are interesting/help me.
     
    Wyla, Aug 15, 2007 IP