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How is my website? please need review on design and website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Bingout, Mar 19, 2017.

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    hey guys, i just register this awesome forum a while ago, I m so eager to know about my website. Can you please review https://www.xtrimblades.com how its look? i m using customizer theme anyone have idea hot to change the background color of it?
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  2. JoeSpirit

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    The overall look of your site looks good to me. You do need to monetize it.

    Since you appear to be targeting the English speaking market I recommend that you get help from someone who speaks English as a 1st language or at least get someone who is more comfortable with English to edit your content.

    You're on the right track. Keep adding content - you need more articles to attract the search engines for organic traffic. I didn't check your keywords for search results or competition so I don't know offhand how viable the safety razor is as a product these days. If you haven't looked into that you might want to make sure there's a future there before you build your site any further.

    Good luck.
     
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    Bingout Greenhorn

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    This is really motivating reply I got..thanks for observing my content and suggesting ur inputs... Can u please tell where m lacking in my English content? It will really help me to improving myself
     
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    As far as your command of the English language I can understand your writing. The thing is I have to read your articles slowly in order to gain that understanding. So I'm mainly recommending that you study English grammar for improving your skills there. You could get a coach to help you and you might also pick an English guide for reference. Something like "The Elements of Style" by William Strunk Jr. and E.B. White should help you considerably.

    Also, just keep writing articles. That practice will help develop your skills. And your site does need more articles so you have a need to write.

    Something else that will help is reading. In order to learn how to write you have to read. I would suggest reading books in any genre as long as you choose works by successful authors.
     
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    Bingout Greenhorn

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    thanks a lot again for your genuine review, just downloaded the book you mention above. Will do my best to get in correct shape.
     
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    Good for you. But don't stop writing articles for your site while you're improving your command of English. Remember, your site needs more articles and the action of writing them will hone your skills as you study the language.
     
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    Bingout Greenhorn

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    yea I will follow as per your directions and will practicing on my writing skill. u also have a website? are you earning online? hope u don't mind my questions :)
     
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    The site looks nice but I'm not sure if you want to keep that title :D
     
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    It looks like it's missing branding or a logo at the top right of the page

    upload_2017-3-21_10-2-9.png
    upload_2017-3-21_10-4-38.png

    get someone to edit your text... that's appalling.
     
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    It's there but I would certainly make it bigger, 79pixels seems to fit without changing the size of the navbar.
     
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    upload_2017-3-21_10-20-17.png
    I'm not seeing it.
     
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    Well it's not exactly the branding but the guy on the left is used as logo here I guess.

    It moves to the navbar once you scroll down past the trigger point and appears next to the title on your tabs.
     
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    Didn't get u my friend! Will u please elaborate what u mean to clarify? It will really help me lot in correcting my mistakes.

    Yea right! Actually that image I will change eventually soon..its just for logo purpose I glued there.

    What's there for horrifying my friend? Please let me know so I can make changes to get more easy.
     
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    Just have a look at the last sentence. You need to rethink it because now it says here's a home method which we will do at home if you want to do it at home. Does that make it more clear? And that's only one thing I'm pointing out in that sentence.
     
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    I guess now I got u my friend..will change it.
     
    Bingout, Mar 21, 2017 IP
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    1. Please try some different logo as your site includes shaving tips for both men & women.
    2. Please balance the blank space in header section.
    3. Work on content in two aspects grammar & presentation. (Note: Sentence should start with capital letter after full stop.)
    4. Add all the social media icons in header & footer section.
    5. Footer section seems to be blank you can add quick links in it.
    Over all site look is good
     
    rajkumar mudaliyar, Mar 21, 2017 IP
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    Bingout Greenhorn

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    Thank you for your valuable suggestions rajkumar.
    Yea, m working on my grammer. About the space on header, did you min i should reduce the space between the header page ?
     
    Bingout, Mar 21, 2017 IP
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    You can resize your logo space will get balanced & yes try some different logo as i said it is common site for both male & female
     
    rajkumar mudaliyar, Mar 21, 2017 IP
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    Bingout Greenhorn

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    Yea, will do needed changes by tonight. regarding logo pic, yea I m going to change that eventually soon once I find my suitable pic. Thanks again for giving your time and suggestion my freind.
     
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    You are most welcome !!!!
     
    rajkumar mudaliyar, Mar 21, 2017 IP