3d graphics looks impressive, did you use 3d for making that gears apinning around? Or you just took this template and put your LOGO there? But still looks very good.
It looks great. I just don't see how it fits with "I'm famous" unless this is just a proof of concept that you're intending to show client or something else. Also, the logo doesn't quite fit the style of gears/bulbs. You might want to research the lighting style of the industrial age. You might be looking for something more along the lines of the early 20th century movie theatre-style signs. It would add a cohesive tie-in with the bulbs shown earlier in the intro, and would make the entire piece feel more whole. Just an opinion. But the sound design, the look and feel of it, would be great for the company whose brand is more of an edgy, serious tone. Great work on the intro if you in fact made it.
the 3D effects are awful! But i think when you add features like "explosions" and a very fast music like at fast and furious it would be awful as now