How is my poem?

Excellent! You have a good stuff. Just keep it up.

 

I like ur poem. Its a Very good poem.

 

Im not a writer, im not a poet but i love to read. The second poem seems to have some sense...

 

This is the nicest thing I`ve red. Do you believe me?

 

owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww,
i never knew !
i wrote it suddenly when i started the thread
you really made me happy by your comments +Rep for you all

 

nice and a small one

 

haha nice man

 

Good Poem. you are good poet.

 

while i m reading your poem i feel that i m druank and i m in the sky

 

thank you all

 

good poem .keep it up.

 

Everyone actually thinks this is a good poem? bollocks
I'm not putting you down, but it isn't that good. Only people who have replied to this thread are "post counters" (basically, wanting to gain more posts, to sell sig/advertising space). Like, i don't understand the poem? "nothing in life is true" whats that supposed to mean? lol

I think if you want to write a good poem, put thought into it, make it mean something, instead of alot of random sentences that don't make sense dude

 

What the? Seriously... that was the worst poem in the history of mankind.

 

It nice but make a poem that actually means something

 

My friend you are bored !

 

very good poem

 

I think you will become a good poet in future.

 

I like both of this poems

 

Very interesting poem.

 

a good try dude........keep doin it