How is my poem?

now i wanna say a poem
so you can read it as a poem



Fly and sky is better !
go and watch the movie "Harry Potter"

Fly and the Sky is High !
Don't call me for asking "WHY?" !

nothing in this life is true
but you know everything will grow

if you read my poem now !
i don't know


Yohoooooooooooooooooo hha

 

I like ur poem. Its a Very nice poem .. Keep it up sharing.. All the best..

 

You really like it ?
or you meaning i have to shake it ?

 

Ya I have read your poem. Its not bad dude

 

Honestly bro its gr8 but truly it awful no u guess which one u want !

 

Nice poem.
Thanks for sharing here.

 

Good poem and very original.

Thanks for the share

 

Great stuff !
Keep it up to make continue........

 

WOW! Impressive. You git some talent there.
Cheers!

 

I like it but the third stanza didn't rhyme like the first two stanzas... Still nice tho.

 

You are so creative!!
The poem is excellent!

 

Nice writtne , mate . Keep it up.

 

Pretty good one

You can do better may be

 

by your comments you made my face blue
i ,ve just learnt that what my heart says is true

 

Congrats Dude! You've finally discover your talent
LOL looking forward to see more of these..........
how about LOVE POEMS, that'll be interesting to share

 

How about this one?

Deep is Blue
Lemons in the grass
People look left
but never to the past.

Secrets beheld
to the fray and on
giving due worth
to the flair in rayon.

 

I like both of this poems but the second is much better ....

 

I must say..
You have originality

 

When reading aloud, it sounds nice poem .

 

Carrying on with your creative juices, some more verses would be good.