How does this Squeeze Page works on You?

Hello,

I just made a new squeeze page and wanted some reviews.

Would you sign up for it? Please try to give reasons for your
view.

http://www.betterfind.org/hydrogen-water-car/

Thanks

 

i like it...nice...what did u use to make it?

 

Colours look nice, I would consider changing the orange font though?

 

Agreed, I would try a blue maybe black. Or a gradient gray/black

 

hello,
changed it again:
http://www.betterfind.org/hydrogen-water-car/

this time it looks simpler but opt-in conversion is now almost 50% although
only based on a small number. lets see what happens when i reached
100 impressions