how does the advertising page looks like.,..

Discussion in 'Blogging' started by countolaf, Jul 11, 2008.

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    hey guys i just want to know how your advertise page looks like? do you put up proofs there and pictures or what? My advertise page is http://www.melvinblog.com/advertise/ and what do you think about it?
     
    countolaf, Jul 11, 2008 IP
  2. hmansfield

    hmansfield Guest

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    It looks good. But drop the personal banter, "since you are here, I assume you are interested..."

    Go straight to business: Benefits. Options. Price.

    ..as if you expect to get the money, because so many others purchase here.

    JMO
     
    hmansfield, Jul 12, 2008 IP
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    Looks good and is well presented. All required information is present, but I think you could do with making your offers more prominent - I mean make them the feature of the page, centre them and make them more seen. Perhaps you could get testimonials from current advertisers.
     
    aarondonohoe, Jul 12, 2008 IP