How do I improve this landing page?

Discussion in 'Google AdWords' started by Dootch, Jun 29, 2008.

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    Dootch, Jun 29, 2008 IP
  2. HeadtheWeb

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    What's this got to do with adwords?
     
    HeadtheWeb, Jun 29, 2008 IP
  3. Dootch

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    i guess coz I designed it specifically for an adwords campaign and couldnt find a better forum for it
     
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    I think the page looks nice, but you may have too much space taken up by your "Big Pink House" I always like the first conversion button or forum to be in the fold(visible) when you load up the page. That graphic is so large it takes up a huge part of the page and will reduce conversions. Hope that helps a bit. Good luck.
    -Patz
     
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    aesthetically it looks good...

    but there is way to much text to read. Sum it up and get your message across with less words. The entire page should be no longer than 2 scrolls and the form you want them to fill out should be above the fold.
     
    robertpriolo, Jun 30, 2008 IP