A few months ago I sought help on a pitch page here. I got awesome help that I put to use. My first attempt was a disaster. The page is converting at less than a 100 to 1 so I am happy but I always want to make it better. Maybe I'm expecting to much. I'm a little afraid to monkey with it too much. It ain't really broke. My niche is quite small. But I'm in the top 10 travel products in CB and usually number one for Asia travel products. Still, I want to do better. Now I know, the obvious thing is to add a video. I'm going to do that very soon. Time to get over my camera shyness. If I was handsome, it would help. haha Any other suggestions. I'm thinking I might need to work on the WHO this is for. I THINK I have the what covered pretty well and the why it will help you. Site is http://expatmanual.com Thanks for the help!