how about grammer this article??

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  1. #1
    do you thing this good grammer??
     
    djackz666, Oct 14, 2012 IP
  2. Senobia

    Senobia Notable Member

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    That has to be....one of THE MOST horrendous pieces of text I have ever seen in my life.

    I knew it was coming, though - from the title of this thread. :confused:
     
    Senobia, Oct 15, 2012 IP
  3. YMC

    YMC Well-Known Member

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    #3
    Hope you didn't pay for that mess.
     
    YMC, Oct 15, 2012 IP
  4. djackz666

    djackz666 Active Member

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    #4
    what you mean? i'm sorry i can speak english very well, i just learn it :)


    wohaaha thansk your idea, it's from spin article :)
     
    djackz666, Oct 18, 2012 IP
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    YMC Well-Known Member

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    #5
    It is fairly obvious that it was spun. It's a fine example of why you should never spin articles.
     
    YMC, Oct 18, 2012 IP
  6. djackz666

    djackz666 Active Member

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    haha thnks 4 your idea..:)
     
    djackz666, Oct 21, 2012 IP
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    Griffin Smith Peon

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    #7
    Whoa...

    I wouldn't put that on your site.
     
    Griffin Smith, Oct 22, 2012 IP
  8. djackz666

    djackz666 Active Member

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    hahaha...yes thnks for attention :D
     
    djackz666, Oct 22, 2012 IP
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    Karen May Jones Prominent Member

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    #9
    Submit it to ezinearticles.... I've seen worse on there. Do you want to pay to have it "fixed". ?
     
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    I agree. Ezinearticles has even worse stuff. Plenty of what seems to be $1 gigs as usual.
     
    dynavox, Oct 22, 2012 IP
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    TheCreator Banned

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    hip hop production does not continuously bell, whistle, and horn blaring at odd moments. there could be a technique onto the madness that almost all people don't perceive, and it's not simple out to capture. If you've ever tried to provide a few beats for no matter reason, May be you'll perceive it quite complicated out to layering along fascinating musical points. Within the cases for all those seeking out old instrumentation schools, things mostly cause issues for all those which are new onto the game : several assume that it's as simple as throwing along a jazzy bass line combined with a few funk. However, that's not how it works....
     
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