1. Advertising
    y u no do it?

    Advertising (learn more)

    Advertise virtually anything here, with CPM banner ads, CPM email ads and CPC contextual links. You can target relevant areas of the site and show ads based on geographical location of the user if you wish.

    Starts at just $1 per CPM or $0.10 per CPC.

Hi what do you think about my website

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by bussw83, Jun 13, 2015.

  1. bussw83

    bussw83 Member

    Messages:
    144
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    33
    #21

    Hi Karen, do you think the music is too happy?

    Yeah I think I will put the post there too, I am new here and didn't notice that section.

    I will follow your advice.

    Thank you your suggestions helped me a lot :)SEMrush
     
    bussw83, Jun 13, 2015 IP
    SEMrush
  2. Karen May Jones

    Karen May Jones Prominent Member

    Messages:
    3,467
    Likes Received:
    290
    Best Answers:
    1
    Trophy Points:
    380
    #22
    I think the music is too loud. It is distracting. Maybe that's just me. Be careful about double posting on the forum. Maybe you can ask the moderator to move your post, but then you might get an infraction. Either way you go, you might get one. haha. They are relatively painless. Dont worry.
     
    Karen May Jones, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  3. bussw83

    bussw83 Member

    Messages:
    144
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    33
    #23
    hahaha ok :)
     
    bussw83, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  4. Matthew Sayle

    Matthew Sayle Prominent Member

    Messages:
    3,272
    Likes Received:
    450
    Best Answers:
    1
    Trophy Points:
    385
    Digital Goods:
    1
    #24
    This is pretty terrible.

    First off, the loading time is absolutely rediculous.

    Also, you aren't offering responsive design unless they spend $399? FOR A LANDING PAGE?!

    Get real dude, these landing pages can be made in a couple hours - TOPS.

    I think it's safe to say you will never see a single sale with this website.

    And if you do, you must be the most epic pre-seller to ever walk the earth.

    Here are 10 landing page templates that are better than yours and cost about $40 each: http://www.inkthemes.com/attractive-landing-page-wordpress-themes/
     
    Matthew Sayle, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  5. bussw83

    bussw83 Member

    Messages:
    144
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    33
    #25
    Oh I see, I guess I can adjust the volume. hahaha ok I will talk to a moderator thanks again Karen :)
     
    Last edited: Jun 13, 2015
    bussw83, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  6. bussw83

    bussw83 Member

    Messages:
    144
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    33
    #26
    Lol well there are landing page services at $1000, and I am offering many things included that worth the price. The loading was covered already. Useless comment but thanks anyway :)
     
    bussw83, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  7. Matthew Sayle

    Matthew Sayle Prominent Member

    Messages:
    3,272
    Likes Received:
    450
    Best Answers:
    1
    Trophy Points:
    385
    Digital Goods:
    1
    #27
    I will take a useless comment over a useless website any day.

    At least mine was free and only wasted 10 seconds.
     
    Matthew Sayle, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  8. bussw83

    bussw83 Member

    Messages:
    144
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    33
    #28
    Lol Well it didn't worth those 10 seconds and my page can and it will be fixed, you have to do to learn... but your comment will always be worthless :)
     
    bussw83, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  9. Matthew Sayle

    Matthew Sayle Prominent Member

    Messages:
    3,272
    Likes Received:
    450
    Best Answers:
    1
    Trophy Points:
    385
    Digital Goods:
    1
    #29
    My comment is about as useless as your education. English much?
     
    Matthew Sayle, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  10. Phil S

    Phil S Member

    Messages:
    61
    Likes Received:
    19
    Best Answers:
    4
    Trophy Points:
    35
    #30
    See, that right there is your problem. You ask for truth, yet you automatically filter and ignore negative comments.
    With that attitude, you will NEVER succeed in ANY field, let alone in one with as much competition as the one you've chosen.
     
    Phil S, Jun 13, 2015 IP
    Matthew Sayle likes this.
  11. bussw83

    bussw83 Member

    Messages:
    144
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    33
    #31
    Lol well with your "perfect grammar" you still came up with a trolling and useless rant, so have a sit because good grammar is not equal to be educated. :)
     
    bussw83, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  12. bussw83

    bussw83 Member

    Messages:
    144
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    33
    #32
    Lol no, the problem is that you don't know the difference between being honest to help from plain trolling. And it's up to me wether I am successful or not, I don't see my anti trollin attitude as a problem but a cleaning method. :)
     
    bussw83, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  13. Matthew Sayle

    Matthew Sayle Prominent Member

    Messages:
    3,272
    Likes Received:
    450
    Best Answers:
    1
    Trophy Points:
    385
    Digital Goods:
    1
    #33
    What do we gain from trolling you?

    Your website is absolutely terrible.

    Problem is, you started this thread because you wanted a pat on the back, not criticism.

    I will give a pat on the back when it's due - but you definitely aren't getting one today.
     
    Matthew Sayle, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  14. bussw83

    bussw83 Member

    Messages:
    144
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    33
    #34
    Lol That is my point but seems that you are not getting it. If you need to troll to give a honest advice then you can skip my post as I stated before, is not like your ramblings will be missed.

    Other people did tell me how to improve the page with a very honest and respecful delivery.

    :)
     
    bussw83, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  15. Matthew Sayle

    Matthew Sayle Prominent Member

    Messages:
    3,272
    Likes Received:
    450
    Best Answers:
    1
    Trophy Points:
    385
    Digital Goods:
    1
    #35
    You're right.

    Sorry for being disrespectful.

    I actually love your website.

    It brings great joy to me.

    Because while you are wasting your resources on this load of crap that will never make a dime in profit, you are staying out of my way in the areas that actually turn a good amount of ROI.

    So, keep doing what you're doing :D
     
    Matthew Sayle, Jun 13, 2015 IP
    Phil S likes this.
  16. bussw83

    bussw83 Member

    Messages:
    144
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    33
    #36
    Lol it's all good I know that is the best you can do sigh, well while you keep posting all that bunch of bull and bag of filth that you call an opinion, I will apply the tips that are actually useful.

    I am glad I am out of your way since it means that I won't have to keep seeing your rantings. hahaha I am already making money the only waste of resources I made was reading your nonesense.

    :)
     
    Last edited: Jun 13, 2015
    bussw83, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  17. Matthew Sayle

    Matthew Sayle Prominent Member

    Messages:
    3,272
    Likes Received:
    450
    Best Answers:
    1
    Trophy Points:
    385
    Digital Goods:
    1
    #37
    Making money, eh?

    What the heck, I got time...

    Where exactly do you make your money?

    It's not Freelancer, that's for sure - member since 2012 without a single client:
    https://www.freelancer.com/u/bussw83.html

    Plus, who on earth would you want to waste time writing for someone else?
    (sorry to all the copywriters out there, I just find the time to profit ratio to be way too small)

    Maybe it's selling spammy backlinks on some rediculous website called 'GigsBull.com':
    http://gigsbull.com/user/bussw83
    (0 sales by the way)

    Maybe the Craiglist Posting that you bought a Proxy service for:
    http://www.blackhatworld.com/blackh...118-have-you-purchased-proxies-fron-them.html
    (I recommend HMA for any proxy related service - them plus a special social network has made me a good amount of money)

    So which one of these genius methods is making you your millions?
     
    Last edited: Jun 13, 2015
    Matthew Sayle, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  18. bussw83

    bussw83 Member

    Messages:
    144
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    33
    #38
    Lol I am glad you have all that free time "genius" so do you really think I am the only bussw83 online?

    2012 gigs that could be from anybody...so clever lol is that your proof against me? Well I should spect it from you sigh...

    To be honest and on behalf of all self millionaires freelancers and entrepreneurs that there is no successful bussiness man/woman out there that haven't done any mistakes. Whoever says something different is a fool.

    They get there because they were willing to learn and never liste to those Debby Downers that are "helping" you.

    I could not care any less if you believe I make money or not, the need to have to prove yourself to others is for children,teens and trolls.

    Lol well I guess you will keep enlighten me with your useless trolling and nonesense..... oh well :(:)
     
    Last edited: Jun 13, 2015
    bussw83, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  19. bussw83

    bussw83 Member

    Messages:
    144
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    33
    #39
    Seriously lol how miserable someone should be for being a troll smh
     
    bussw83, Jun 13, 2015 IP
  20. Matthew Sayle

    Matthew Sayle Prominent Member

    Messages:
    3,272
    Likes Received:
    450
    Best Answers:
    1
    Trophy Points:
    385
    Digital Goods:
    1
    #40
    If you want help making money, I have no problem helping you.

    However, you should listen to what the experts are telling you.

    Some of us have different delivery methods than others, but the message is the same.

    --

    Want some real, honest-to-goodness advice?

    Your website needs to be scrapped before it hemorrhages any more of your time and money.

    It's not going to work.

    Even if you had the most amazing website in the world, it's just too competitive of a niche.

    You need to be different.

    There is nothing different about landing pages to grab leads.

    Plus, there are people in the same niche with 6-figure marketing budgets.

    You will NEVER outrank them.

    So, use this as a lesson well learned.

    ALWAYS do your research before blindly jumping into a niche.

    You can't just "build it and they will come" - it doesn't work that way.

    Make a plan, do your research and THEN execute it.
     
    Matthew Sayle, Jun 13, 2015 IP