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I use copywriter to write content for other site. But he is not native speaker.. I don't know how much quality is writing. please write your opinion and critics about his job ;
here is the sample of the content :
Cardiac sonographer jobs have an important role in medical field because these jobs are aimed to help patients who are experiencing this illness. Knowing the jobs is really important if you would like to be as an ultrasound technician because it gives you enough information related to this field. While talking about the jobs, you must know that this position will allow you to take pictures the hearts of people. After that, the photos will be analyzed by the doctors to make certain that the hearts of patients are healthy.

If you would like to do these cardiac sonographer jobs, the first thing you must do is to least an associate's degree. These jobs are competitive so you must try hard in getting the position. In fact, these jobs bring good effects to your future so you must consider them. In doing these jobs, getting the certificate is crucial because it ensures most people that you are qualified in this field. Also, the certificate also makes medical people believe that you are understand in the jobs. By making sure people around you, you can ensure that you deserve in the jobs and you can show your ability.
To get these cardiac sonographer jobs, there are two options of certifying organizations which are known in the United States. The first one is the American Registry of Diagnostic Medical Sonographers (ARDMS). The second one is Cardiovascular Credentialing International (CCI). To join over there, you must pass the ASCeXAM and this exam is administered by the National Board of Echocardiography. The exam is done to prove that you are qualified and competent in this field. Just be sure to choose the one that is comfortable for you so you can learn very well and you can make yourself to be competent in this field.

While talking about the cardiac sonographer jobs, you must understand that they work with imaging equipment so you will spend lots of time in imaging laboratories and facilities. These jobs also make you spend more days to interpret the ordering cardiologist's instructions. By knowing and following the instructions, the patient will feel comfortable because you are comfortable and understand the procedure rightly. To make you sure about these jobs, you must know that they just administer the test not analyze the results since the analyzing process is done by doctors.
These cardiac sonographer jobs are an expensive job because the equipment needed is high technology and the facilities are purchased at expensive prices. The high-tech equipment is able to get the best results especially in knowing the condition of the patient so you can be sure that the equipment is worthy for the money you may have spent. The facilities provided the jobs include hospitals, medical centers, urgent cares or private imaging facilities. At standard measurement, these jobs will earn between $40,000 and $60,000 a year and it depends on whether the facility is public or private and the sonographer is full-time or not.

These jobs come in some options of types so it is important to understand them rightly in order not to make any mistake in choosing the right jobs for your needs. Those are Certified Cardiographic Technicians (CCT), Registered Vascular Specialists (RVS), Registered Diagnostic Cardiac Sonographers (RDCS), Registered Vascular Technologists (RVT), Registered Cardiovascular Invasive Specialists (RCIS) and also Registered Cardiac Sonographers (RCS). In choosing the right position, you must know your ability and talent so you can be sure to increase your ability and you can be qualified in the jobs. In this case, you must be sure and careful to determine the right cardiac sonographer jobs.
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I think most people will understand your english. But you should also put SEO on your articles..

 

Use gogole translator is terribly.

 

Trash unreadable. You CAN read it but it is so poor no one would.