Hi Gurus, please comment my landing page for a Clickbank product!

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  2. bl4ckmaN^

    bl4ckmaN^ Well-Known Member

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    Looks pretty good.

    Maybe you could format your text to highlight important bits by using different colors/fonts/font size
     
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    It's good, but you need to add a bit more spice to it in the form of a sales letter, have you thought of an opt-in list as well?

    Any landing pages we design always use the same conversion boosters you see everywhere, opt-in box that punches out, catchy header, graphics, pictures and good quality content.

    Regards,
    EIMG
     
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    Looks good, but the other pages besides home page break apart when I view them.
     
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    Good man, cloak your hop's using PHP redirect ;)
     
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  6. mvhomebusiness

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    Thank you very much for your answers! Now I will comment your comments a bit.
    I totally agree with blackman about highlightening some text.
    The Commission Blueprint materials also teach a bit why and how to make an opt-in page but I am not that far yet. As I sayd this is my first landing page that I made with help of my friend. I will think about an opt-in page in the future.
    There has been a lot of discussion in the Commission Blueprint forum about cloaking hops. But there is no right answer to that question as I understood. Some say it´s better not to show that you are an affiliate, some say it doesn´t matter, that a person who is not an affiliate himself even don´t know anything about hops.
     
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    All they need to do is swap out your ID with theirs in the hoplink, and you get nothing and they pay less than half the price. The pros outweight the cons of having a php redirect, if there are any cons at all.
     
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    I agree.. It's really not hard to figure out that clickbank is an affiliated based website. All a person needs to do is see that they can make an account in all of 30 seconds, imput their hoplink and they now get to keep some of their money, and get the product.
     
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  9. mvhomebusiness

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    But I guess that if anyone wants to leave me out of commission he could do it anyway by cleaning his cookies and becoming an affiliate of the same product and will get it for half the price. So, any other suggestions?
     
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    Ya that is really a widespread practise. I have seen some friends doing that.. Clickbank should have a longer process of approval and verification.. just like other networks like NVB though not that strict..
     
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