Hi Frieds, Please review my site - I really need

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    Can you review on my new site?

    Hi, I opened this website just two days ago and I would love to hear any comments as well as critics from you . What something I need to add that you think would offer users more value in saving? Give also erratum about spelling and punctuation, because I really can not use English properly. Thank you very much in advance.
    www.starvalid.com
     
    Last edited: Jan 13, 2011
    fixesign, Jan 13, 2011 IP
  2. bluezephyr

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    I think I have a problem with the font size. :) Can you make it larger?
     
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  3. fixesign

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    Thank you bluezephyr, I've changed it. Is there something else?
     
    fixesign, Jan 13, 2011 IP
  4. justhandsome

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    #4
    fixesign...
    logo very small,
    wasting the valuable space abpve the fold with the google ad ;
    why u put a calender ...evry1 hs their mobiles/pcs/laptops...u r wasting space..
    The site is very dull looking...u need to make some bold fonts...put some colors..and put ur offer in a pop up
    so that people take some action on it....
     
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  5. mschenkel

    mschenkel Peon

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    First off, I don't quite understand the purpose of the site. As @justhandsome noted, the Google Ad is too large. The ad that was showing when checked out the site was "Want more Hits to your Website", and that is what I thought the site was about.
     
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  6. fixesign

    fixesign Member

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    Thank you friends. Now I'm back with the changes. And I make a pop up on the menu (see all 'content'). What do you think, I want to hear more from you? Thanks in advance,friends.
     
    fixesign, Jan 17, 2011 IP
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    Don't like the color scheme at all.
    The bold print is hard to read. I think you need to change the font for them. I think the font needs to be larger. Are you planning on adding anymore info on the home page than what you have now. If not, then what you have on there now needs to be redesigned to fill up the page. Too much empty space showing
     
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  8. fixesign

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    Friends, I have redesigned including the design on the template. But I do not have own content, because this site is only for those who wish to submit content. I have found only one registrant, but I find it difficult to invite them again. What is the explanation on my main page is difficult to understand? How am I to begin? Please help me friends, I want to hear from you about everything my site. Thanks in advance,friends.
     
    fixesign, Feb 8, 2011 IP
  9. DesignersParadise

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    A survey was published about a year ago stating that a website has to sell itself within the first 5 seconds of visiting the website.

    You need to make your site look a little better, it looks boring. Not to take offense as it looks like its an ok website, just needs a little design on it.
     
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  10. fixesign

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    I do not understand, can you explain to me, friend?
     
    fixesign, Feb 10, 2011 IP
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    Seems ok to me, I don't really like the various colors for fonts in the main paragraphs in the body. Might be easier on the eyes to make that a bit less distracting. Hope this helps.
     
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    looks good, change red and green colors
     
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  13. Abhilash Sangamam

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    Change the color of the main content.i.e body. Red and green looks bad, go with blue or black. And dont decorate with different colors.keep it clean and simple.
     
    Abhilash Sangamam, Feb 12, 2011 IP